Fic: Fault

[xraex21]

Title: Fault
Author: Rae, xraex21 
Beta: overthemoo  did an amazing job on this. I seem to have a problem with commas, as in I don’t use them very often. Thank you so much Bit!
Fandom/Pairing: Glee: Rachel Berry/Quinn Fabray
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,925
Spoilers: Season 2: Though I do not believe anything is directly referred to, it is where I pulled the

Comments

[vsquared_k]

O gawd, that was all kinds of painful to read... in a good way, of course. It was beautiful and tragic and wonderful at the same time.

Angst, then kinda-fluff, then angst, then... fluff and the beautifully happy ending, and... I'm happy, I really am.

Thanks for this :D

[xraex21]

I think my friend recapped it best when she said it was a "roller coaster ride".

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D Thank you for reading and reviewing!

[hostile_666]

That was heartbreakingly beautiful. Really amazing writing :)

[xraex21]

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :D

[xraex21]

Thank you! I was worried I couldn't write angst well. Your review is very much appreciated.

[dreamupfalldown]

WOW!
Tricky Tricky Tricky
You really got me; you got me real good... that was mean. I THOUGHT RACHEL DIED! Then Quinn got hit by a truck. Then there was that flashback and I thought they BOTH had died. At one point I thought it was all just a dream too. I was pretty confused as to where in time everything was happening, haha.

Well I gotta give you props, great job! I actually really REALLY kind of (in the words of a not-so dead Rachel Berry) like, like-like it.
=D

[xraex21]

I had a hard time editing it because it was so angsty. I do enjoy being tricky. :D

I'm so happy you like, like-liked it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

[varconc]

this is really beautiful. (: you wrote Quinn's emotions really well. The banter between Quinn and Rachel was perfect, and it really reflected Quinn's struggle and confustion. I was a bit thrown by the timeline thought, is it a dream, or a flashback or something? (:

But overall, I really liked this; I usually avoid angst, but this was good (: I like the style of which you wrote this, everything was really tight and well-paced :D Thanks for sharing this :D

[xraex21]

Yeah the timeline was meant to confuse, I didn't want it to be completely clear as to what was happening until the end. The bits between the "-*-*-*-*-" markings were meant to be a dream caused by the physical and emotional trauma Quinn received by being hit by the pickup.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.