Ficlet: Vengeance

[xraex21]

Title: Vengeance
Author: xraex21 
Beta: smartyshortie , all mistakes are my own though.
Fandom: CSI
Pairing: Catherine/Sara
Disclaimer: I own neither of these lovely characters nor the world they play in.
Spoilers: Well it turns out everything is fair game in this one. I kind of went for broke.
Summary: My response to cathandsara 's Week 2 Challenge: Vengeance
Rating: PG

Comments

[cat967]

Nice one I feel sorry for Sara

[xraex21]

I dunno, having Cath flashing some skin would probably make me want to switch places with Sara, even if Cath is pretty pissed.

[the_dark_zodiac]

Wow. Brutal, I can feel Cath's anger from here.

*goes to a dark place and enjoys it*

Is there going to be a follow up? 'Cause I would love to see it.

*wanders off to complete challenge fic(s)*

You Rock!

tdz.

[xraex21]

It always comes back to the question: Why is Cathrine's anger directed at Sara?

There are so many other people that she could be focus her anger on, but it's always Sara.

Plus an angry!Cath is ha hot!Cath.

Thanks!

[the_dark_zodiac]

That makes me wonder. Hmm. *ponders this*

I kinda like to think that there's a little streak of something else there.

Oh yes

*fans self*

tdz.

[xraex21]

mmmm I like to think that there's a LOT of something else there...

[carlyisnot]

Great piece. I also feel for Sara, but i think it's easy somehow to feel sorry for Sara. I always find myself doing so even when she doesn't entirely deserve it. What's interesting about your fic is that it makes me feel more sorry for Catherine (something that doesn't often happen for me), even tho she is damn angry, it also comes across as desperate sadness, a sense of her team breaking apart, of being abandoned by Sara in particular. That sadness shines through all her anger and lust for vengeance, i love it. The other sad thing that makes me feel sorry for them both is that i'm sure Sara won't see any sadness in Catherine's anger and behavior. She will probably take it at face value, as pure anger and vengeance and Catherine abusing her power and control.

Is there going to be more parts to this fic? Would love to read more.

Thanks for sharing

xoxo
Carly

[xraex21]

It's how their dynamic always worked...a little sad yes

I don't think I'll post more parts to this, but I depending on how the other Challenges go I might write a companion piece.

Thanks for reading!

[smartyshortie]

WIN! You know how much I like this but I'll leave extra love just because I can!

[xraex21]

They are my first love. Forever and always.