Well, pretty nice for a first try ^^ I can feel the emotion XD tho I think you shouldn't 'enter' too much and give much '...' coz it's a little tiring and confusing for the readers ^^;;
aha~~ i realize it too... when i read it all over it again... its kinda hard to read it... well,,, maybe "enter" in my mirosoft word and in here are fiferent so i have to try another way to make it easy to read... thankx
the truth is... it's not finished... because i have a "sequel" to it... but for a test since i dont know how to post it and etc... and it's my first time podting a fanfic... i post half of it first ^^ another reason why i didn't post the last scene is... i havent found the right words to end it... story, plot, its in order.. just words... /argh... you see... i'm stuck in words... but i'll find it later... i have to!! thankx for reading
yes there is... and i'm in a middle of finishing it since i haven't found the right word to end it... but if i finished it, i'll send it to you^^... yes tebar tebar dan tebar
Tezuka you bastard >.< how can you do that to Fuji x3 *hugs Fuji* Nice story ^-^ you sure do know how to narrate Fuji's feelings very well hope to see more of your work XD
I wrote before, but not much. You made me write more XD Not that I care, it's fun. Guess you inspire me, cause I have more ideas now ^_^ Yeah, everybody who is able to write TezuFuji, should write TezuFuji!
everyone is so fired up lately, i'm happy to know that... yes she did that and look now... we all start to try... even though sometimes i feel very very not confident to myself... it's nice to have someone who will support and give courage... hahahha credits to a1y XD
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I can feel the emotion XD
tho I think you shouldn't 'enter' too much and give much '...' coz it's a little tiring and confusing for the readers ^^;;
maybe you can try simpler format next time ^^
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when i read it all over it again... its kinda hard to read it...
well,,, maybe "enter" in my mirosoft word and in here are fiferent so i have to try another way to make it easy to read...
thankx
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I can feel the emotion, especially Fuji. Really bad Tezuka, really poor Fuji -_-
Anyway, thank you for sharing^^
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it's not finished...
because i have a "sequel" to it...
but for a test since i dont know how to post it and etc... and it's my first time podting a fanfic...
i post half of it first ^^
another reason why i didn't post the last scene is...
i havent found the right words to end it...
story, plot, its in order.. just words... /argh...
you see... i'm stuck in words... but i'll find it later... i have to!!
thankx for reading
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when you're done, you can send it to me again if you want. I'll help you again XD
yeah, akhirnya gw menebar virus buat nulis TezuFuji XD XD
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Nice story ^-^ you sure do know how to narrate Fuji's feelings very well hope to see more of your work XD
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A1y-puff makes everybody write or draw XD She made me write too XD
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and everyone loves TezuFuji and can write SHOULD write fics on them >D
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Yeah, everybody who is able to write TezuFuji, should write TezuFuji!
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yes she did that and look now...
we all start to try... even though sometimes i feel very very not confident to myself...
it's nice to have someone who will support and give courage... hahahha credits to a1y XD
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