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Fic: Ballroom - Chapter 6

Jun 28, 2012 14:59

Title: Ballroom
Chapter: 6/11
Author: xpaperplanex
Rating: R
Word Count: ~3800
Characters: Sephiroth, Cloud, Zack, Tseng
Pairings: Sephiroth/Cloud
Genre: darkfic, drama
Warnings: Squick all over the place. I'm not warning for anything specific though, so read at your own risk. Not a happy fic.
Disclaimer: I do not own FFVII and make no money from this work.
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Comments 8

koyappi June 28 2012, 21:59:55 UTC

OMG, although I feel bad for Cloud, I looooove Zack and his helpfulness, "How's his flow?" LOLOLOL!

And Sephiroth is the sweetest guy! I swear if he were real, there would be a mob fighting over him.

xpaperplanex July 1 2012, 05:14:25 UTC

Things like flow are important! The girl said! (You may want to hold off on fighting over Sephiroth, though.)

ardwynna_m June 28 2012, 23:25:54 UTC

Better follow that mac&cheese up with lots and lots of chocolate, boys. Not a lot of experience with girls these guys have, if they don't know boobs can be tender certain times of the month. I can't blame Cloud in the least for blue-screening on everybody. The first time can be awkward enough even when it's expected. Props for Seph for going above and beyond, but Tseng has me concerned.

xpaperplanex July 1 2012, 05:16:15 UTC

Surely one of them has heard that chocolate helps, though they really don't know a whole lot about these sorts of things. At all. I'm not sure where Zack got his education, but it wasn't very good at all.

amarissia June 28 2012, 23:44:42 UTC

Ah, so that's what it was! Poor Cloud, even I don't do well when my Aunt Flo comes into town, I can't imagine how upset he must be. *hugs him* And Zack saves the day, and Seph is just...I love him even more now.

Thank you!

xpaperplanex July 1 2012, 05:19:15 UTC

Yeah, I don't do buns, not even imaginary ones. But Cloud appreciates your hugs--he hates Aunt Flo and hopes she never comes to town again.

You're welcome, and thank you!

OMG o..O zillahd666 June 29 2012, 13:49:44 UTC

I would like be totally useless lol
great story you have me hooked luv srsly and I would so take a order for a Sephiroth please :)

Re: OMG o..O xpaperplanex July 1 2012, 05:20:14 UTC

I think they all felt totally useless, so you wouldn't be far behind :)

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!