Fic: Ballroom - Chapter 5

[xpaperplanex]

Title: Ballroom
Chapter: 5/11
Author: xpaperplanex
Rating: R
Word Count: ~3100
Characters: Sephiroth, Cloud, Zack, Tseng
Pairings: Sephiroth/Cloud
Genre: darkfic, drama
Warnings: Squick all over the place. I'm not warning for anything specific though, so read at your own risk. Not a happy fic.
Disclaimer: I do not own FFVII and make no money from this work.

Comments

[fire_by_fire]

Um... Lj cut your chapter in half, you know?...... I refuse to believe you finished the chapter in a place like that. You aren't mean... Right?

Why do I have this feeling that Cloud isn't in labs? But then why was he screaming? Hm... Maybe Sephiroth just got a proof that Cloud wasn't pregnant? ;) More questions than answers - I both love chapters like this one and hate them *sighs*

Poor N. - 'n' is the first letter of my name. If that guy was 'Nathaniel', I'd feel a bit uneasy. Anyway: I hate Hojo. I hope something really, REALLY bad will happen to him.

Sephiroth's words that 'practice makes perfection' were a little bitter - at least the Cloud's situation made one good thing: Sephiroth's social skills has improved; I like how he made Zack feel better.

I don't want to sound like ungrateful reader, but pleasepostnewchaptersoon :)

[xpaperplanex]

Um... have you met me? I'm very mean and would totally do that. But it was most certainly an LJ mistake. Bad LJ!

N is totally not named Nathaniel. Not that I actually gave him a full name, but if I had, it wouldn't have been Nathaniel, so you can rest easy. (I have a cousin named Nathaniel, so that would have been weird.)

Yeah, I think Sephiroth's a little bitter about all this "improvement to social skills" being forced on him. He was happy with the way he was! But it is nice that he can help out a little when his friend is upset... he supposes.

New chapter on Thursday, and since I got distracted from replying for so long, that's totally soon!

[koyappi]

Woo hoo, looks like it's that time of the month for poor Cloud! I can't wait to see Sephiroth deal with this one.

[xpaperplanex]

What do you mean you have to insert them???

[kazi_kun]

*flattens self against wall as blur flashes by* Wow, when Seph wants to move...don't forget chocolate! Chocolate makes EVERYTHING better! ^^

[xpaperplanex]

He'll send Zack for chocolate! You promise chocolate will make it better?

[kazi_kun]

It does for girls from birth...why not with a genderbent chocobo?

[amarissia]

AGH! Cliffhanger! I'm gonna be bititng my nails until I know what's wrong with Cloud. Although I'm guessing the poor baby's got a bun in the oven.

...Well, Zack will make a good uncle...

Thank you, and you're evil. :)

[xpaperplanex]

Zack would indeed make a good uncle. Cloud might not make the best mother...

You're welcome, and thank you :)

[meowwl]

Um, moodiness, check. Sudden onset fatigue, check. Uncomfortable boobs, check...Next step is heading to the store for maxi pads!

[xpaperplanex]

It could be something else! Couldn't it? COULDN'T IT???