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Prisoners of War Ch. 43

Oct 18, 2010 17:16

Title: Prisoners of War Ch. 43
Author: xpaperplanex
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~4700
Pairings: Sephiroth/Cloud
Genre: hurt/comfort, romance
Warnings: non-descriptive surgery and descriptions of ouchie things
Disclaimer: I do not own FFVII and make no money from this work.
Summary: Cloud and Sephiroth are taken prisoner by AVALANCHE. No one, least of all ( Read more... )

fic: pow, pairing: sephiroth/cloud

Comments 30

ardwynna_m October 18 2010, 10:54:02 UTC

Ha, Seph has a regular vet in one of my 'verses too. Good to see Cloud getting patched up properly. There's so much room for wing kink now. XD

lenine2 October 18 2010, 23:24:09 UTC

Was it one of yours I read where Sephiroth's grown son brings a vet to patch up his broken wing?

ardwynna_m October 20 2010, 23:14:00 UTC

In mine Aerith called the vet but the boys were there giving Seph hell.

xpaperplanex October 19 2010, 06:23:16 UTC

Yay wing kink! (And yes, there will be wing kink.)

beruthiels_cats October 18 2010, 11:08:37 UTC

I can see several major advantages coming from what's happened here:
Cloud not being in so much pain, plus no longer dreading having to tell about his wing should help him a great deal when it comes to fighting off Jenova. Added to the fact the others have kept their word about protecting him and it should will go a long way to rebuilding his shattered trust and self-image. Hiding it has been such an awful strain, both mentally and physically...he should start to heal much more quickly now. Sorry for the ramble, but so many things about this chapter have far-reaching implications. Well done, and best of luck with school!

xpaperplanex October 19 2010, 06:28:36 UTC

Thank you. Yeah, this chapter was a big turning point for Cloud's recovery. It'll still take some time, but at least he's on the way now.

towo October 18 2010, 15:40:06 UTC

hahahahaha A vet!! aw xD why WHY I pictured Sheldon -from the big bang theory- doing the surgery???? poor guy, threaten by Seph :B

and still... POOR CLOUD! gah! I will need to study wings anatomy <33 btw, it will look like Genesis at the end? all bumpy and weird shaped? -haha, nice background music!! XD <3333

xpaperplanex October 19 2010, 06:31:58 UTC

Who else would they get to fix a wing? I really need to watch Big Bang Theory... *adds it to the list*

No Genesis stupid wing! That's just the dumbest design ever. Hee! I thought the music was fitting! :D <333

ali_moogle October 18 2010, 19:50:47 UTC

Lovin the wings..now cloud has one too so the one winged angel isnt alone! Great depiction of aeris, for me,she truly is the ultimate heroine

xpaperplanex October 19 2010, 06:32:36 UTC

Thanks! I absolutely adore Aerith, glad you like the way I'm portraying her.

kazura_uyurin October 18 2010, 21:11:44 UTC

It was one thing to know that Cloud's got a wing, but then to learn what Hojo did... I wholeheartedly support Sephiroth planning to torture Hojo even more before killing him.

A vet. It was a somewhat amusing thought, but logical in any case. Yay for Aerith! ^^

I think if Aerith were to become the doctor for SOLDIER, Zack would be fighting his fellow colleagues off left, right and centre for getting too close to his girl. I can just imagine everyone running to Aerith for the smallest of injuries. xD

xpaperplanex October 19 2010, 06:36:25 UTC

Sephiroth is glad for the support!

Yeah, a vet to look at a person seems wrong, but it made the most sense here. And yay Aerith!

SOLDIER: Dr. Gainsborough, I have a paper cut. Will you kiss it better?
Zack: Get the hell out of here before I give you a real injury!

kazura_uyurin October 19 2010, 07:00:49 UTC

ROFL! xD Yeah, that is how I imagined Zack to react. Go Zack! :D