Week one, challenge one: Home

[sheisjoanne]

Title: Home
Pairing: Tao/Sehun
Rating: PG
Genre: Fluff
Length: 642 words
Summary: Zitao thinks Seoul might be his new home because he misses it - and China doesn't seem that great anymore.
23. Write a pairing you've never written before

Comments

[anonymous]

This is so sweet! ^-^
The two of them giggling and holding hands is such a cute image and what they have seems like such a pure, innocent love :')
Sehun's call came really unexpected and Tao saying “I can’t wait to come back HOME, Sehun.” was perfect, really the perfect ending.
You did a great job with this, keep up the good work! ♥

[sheisjoanne]

They really are adorable. I really liked to write such a fluffy one shot :3
Thank you so much, I will ♥

[anonymous]

shrieks this was so adorbs ; ;
like omg the two of them behaving like giddy high school girls,
sneaking out on bubble tea dates and holding hands.
eek so qt so qt.
one thing tho, instead of using "even the older, with his bright, cheerful and talkative personality",
i would've used "even the elder, with his bright, cheerful and talkative personality".
tbh even i'm not sure about the difference,
but i'm anal so.... heh.
but yes good job \ o /

[sheisjoanne]

omg, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it ;u; ♥
I'm not sure about the difference but I think you can use both. But since I'm not sure, thank you for pointing it out :3

[anonymous]

This is so cute ;3; absolutely amazing. Gorgeous in the cutest ways. ;A; Please write more taohun! <3
I really can't say anything else that cute cause this is literally the cutest okay ;A;

[sheisjoanne]

Thank you so much, I'm happy you enjoyed it.
I will write more Taohun because they are too much for me not to write ;u; ♥