Comments | xoxocamp: Week 2, Challenge 1: the knot comes loose

edoriko in xoxocamp

Week 2, Challenge 1: the knot comes loose

Jul 31, 2013 04:38

sekai & past!kaiyeol
pg; 1.3k
sometimes we become afraid to love
-sequel to from flame to dust (but can also be read as a standalone)
-for 24: work on a WIP

( It's been three years since Sehun entered the company and Jongin has used this time to memorize little pieces of Sehun. )

week 2, author: edoriko, length: one-shot, pairing: chanyeol/kai, rating: pg, pairing: kai/sehun

Comments 5

kfangirl4 July 31 2013, 05:46:23 UTC

That happens to me sometimes when I'm writing too. All good plans to write smut & then the characters have other plans for the story.

edoriko August 2 2013, 09:12:25 UTC

hahah yeah ;w; gdi why does plot get in the way XD

gokulex59 August 1 2013, 13:13:14 UTC

I may have gone a little bit annoyed when Jongin remained speechless. But I loved how naturally they just left it behind.

edoriko August 2 2013, 09:14:49 UTC

Because the previous fic is about Jongin leaving Chanyeol I wanted to emphasize Jongin's reluctance to enter a new relationship (due to his break-up and guilt etc.)... but lol I also feel like gdi Jongin just go for it! ;A;

anonymous August 18 2013, 02:45:21 UTC

a very ~natural~ fic! as in.. i think it's really realistic. for some reason, i kept feeling like there were mistakes though.. weird..