Comments | xoxocamp: Week 1, Challenge 5: we are the pieces that were swallowed up (pt. 2)

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Week 1, Challenge 5: we are the pieces that were swallowed up (pt. 2)

Jul 29, 2013 11:45

Title: we are the pieces that were swallowed up (pt. 2)
Pairing: sechen & xiuhan
Rating: PG for now
Genre: sci-fi/magic realism
Length: 578 words
Summary/Warnings: post apocalypse!AU
-for 26: write in a different style
-continuation of this

( There are ways that one learns to survive after the end of the world, and Minseok has taught Sehun all of them. )

author: edoriko, !fanfic, rating: pg, week 1, length: drabble

Comments 6

kfangirl4 July 30 2013, 04:35:25 UTC

Ok I'm confronting my fears and taking this ride with you but then you give me POISONED FROGS????? My dreams are already fitful. Soul-keepers? Eh, I lost mine a while back. So, what happens next?

edoriko August 2 2013, 09:16:25 UTC

sorry, sorry~

haha I think we've all lost our souls to kpop (and EXO) haha ^u^

looool I haven't figured out what happens next yet... /playing it by ear/ but we'll see.... *u*

gokulex59 August 1 2013, 21:17:51 UTC

I love this AU so much. I love this AU so damn much.

This is a great start of SeChen, and I loved the detail where it's Minseok who taught Sehun almost everything. The magic in this is appealing, I love the way you can take a part of or whole soul and how Sehun is clever enough to deal with Jongdae.

edoriko August 2 2013, 09:17:38 UTC

!!!

oh wow I'm glad you like it that much! thank you! *u*

yutings August 16 2013, 09:50:19 UTC

Okayokay, lemme start with I did like; The world that you've created is vivid and and the way your described it was really nice! The characters also were really nice. Personally, I really liked the Xiuhan in it and I liked the way that you portrayed them and their relationship ( ... )

anonymous August 18 2013, 02:49:42 UTC

i decided to just not read the first part because #REBEL and let me tell you i am thoroughly confused but also eel like i understand this story in some weird way.. i really enjoyed some of the imagery (granted, there wasn't that much in the first bit)