Week 1, Challenge 4: we are the pieces that were swallowed up

[edoriko]

Title: we are the pieces that were swallowed up
Pairing: sechen & xiuhan
Rating: PG for now
Genre: sci-fi/magic realism
Length: ~1000w
Summary/Warnings: post apocalypse!AU
-for 26: write in a different style
-I want to add more to this, but for now it could be a standalone

Comments

[kfangirl4]

I must compliment you on the writing but this story disturbed me so much I'm not sure if I could keep reading it if you kept writing. Maybe it's because I already have a fear of the world ending, but this story made my skin crawl.

[edoriko]

I'm sorry for disturbing you ;w; The rest of the story is going to be about sechen's adventure to bring xiuhan back home so maybe it won't be as sad/scary?

It's not really supposed to be a story about the end of the world, but a story about life AFTER the end of the world. =w=

[kfangirl4]

Thank you. I had this worry that Xiuhan were gone - like killed or, gulp, butchered for hungry post-apocalyptic survivors. You see, my brain went to scary places that weren't even there in your story because of my pre-existing fears. I'm afraid of snakes, heights and the apocalypse (especially nuclear)....

My apologies for my fears getting their goo all over your story. XD

[edoriko]

ooo don't worry, I'm glad that I could make you feel better!

Yep, so the bulk is going to be sechen exploring the market and all of the weird things they come across. *u* I usually write realistic stories so I'm kind of excited to write something more fantasy based. ^^

tbh I dunno if I could do that xiuhan ;; BUT I DON'T WANT TO GIVE TOO MUCH AWAY SO I'LL LEAVE IT THERE =w=

[gokulex59]

WAIT I FORGOT TO COMMENT ON THIS.

Ahem. I forgot what I was gonna say fifteen hours ago, but this story felt so realistic. I loved your realism. And, in all honesty, this is an AWESOME story.

[edoriko]

hahaha it's too bad you forgot what you were going to say, but thanks for commenting! I'm glad you like it so far. =w=