Week one, challenge four: long distance call

[sheisjoanne]

Title: long distance call
Pairing: bff!Xiu Min/Chen (mentions of Xiu Min/Lu Han & Baekhyun/Chen)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Fluff, friendship
Length: 1018 words
Summary/Warnings: Best friends are the worst kind of friend.
10. use a prompt from exo prompt generator to base your fic on

Prompt:
pairing :: Xiumin / Chen
prompts :: Skype and/or other side of

Comments

[gokulex59]

I now forgive you for breaking my heart before.

[sheisjoanne]

That's good to hear <3

[edoriko]

oh my bff!xiuchen! yes I like this brotp very much ;w;

I think I squealed when chen hugged the computer, wow that's adorable

My only comment is that it seems like the fic is really dialogue heavy, so I'd suggest adding some descriptive paragraphs talking about their inner feelings or the characters' surroundings.