(Criminal Minds/Heroes) Boy Meets Girl, Except When He Doesn’t for etoile_dunord

[aurilly]

Title: Boy Meets Girl, Except When He Doesn’t
Author: a_cook1
Fandoms: Criminal Minds/Heroes
Characters René (aka The Haitian), Noah Bennet, Nathan Petrelli; Penelope Garcia, Aaron Hotchner, Kevin Lynch
Pairings: René/Penelope, Penelope/Kevin
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 4,848
Spoilers: Through season 4 of Heroes, through season 5 of Criminal Minds
Warnings:

Comments

[yeomanrand]

Oh, poor Rene!

ooh shiny

[karrenia_rune]

Hey. I liked this and you made the melding of the two verses almost seamless. I liked it that you gave the Haitian a name. I had kinda forgotten that he had one and that this was told from his perspective and that he had immediately took to Penelope Garcia. She's a fantastic character. Well done!

Thanks and take care, karrenia

[etoiledunord]

Oh, this was wonderful! Rene is such an underappreciated character. His loyalties were always somewhat ambiguous, and I love how you've explored his attitude towards his abilities and how he's asked to use them. The bits about how each member of the BAU is different to extract memories from was awesome. I was particularly amused by his frustration with Reid, since I also have an eidetic memory. ^_^

This was a great interpretation of the prompt! And it was so bittersweet. Rene should have some pure happy, and he and Garcia had some wonderful little conversations. The scene where Rene and Noah show up at Garcia's apartment was hilarious! ...until it was sad. And the first bit in the elevator was very cute.

Much love for this fic! Thank you so much! =D

[perdiccas]

Oh wow, this is brilliant, if heartbreaking. I loved how you wrote Garcia, it felt totally her. And you're totally got me shipping it now. XD