Positive (Chapter 4)

[xojemmaxo]

Title: Positive
Author: xojemmaxo
Rating: Nc-17 (This chapter :D)
Pairing: RyWalk
POV: Third
Summary: "A manual," repeats Ryan. "Is there one for when it's born?" he asks Jon hopefully. "Like, what you're meant to do with it?"
Disclaimer: I don't own The Young Veins, Panic! at the Disco, or any of their respective members. I do own Ryan's unborn baby,

Comments

[what_gaiety]

/licks lips.
hot

as far as constructive crit goes i can't say much as I really only read and watch. not write or engage (ehehehehehe)

but i liked this. the chapter overall is my favorite so far i think.

[xojemmaxo]

:D

Lol, that's okay. :P

Thanks! <3

[wikidchik101]

It's kind of hard to think about sex in a good way when you've just went through the hardest breakup of your life two days prior, but this was pretty schweet. I mean, minus the part where Jon like annihilates Ryan's behind.

[xojemmaxo]

Ugh, I know how that feels. D: Breakups suck.

I have an inability to write normal smex scenes. Some one always gets hurt. *facepalm*

<3