Fic: Master Part Six

[xocoatldreams]

Title: Master Part Six
Author: xocoatldreams
Fandom: BtVS
Characters/Pairings: S/X/A, B/R, T/W, Giles
Rating: PG
Prompt/Challenge: When?
Warnings: None this chapter
Disclaimer: The people and places of BtVS do not belong to me I am just using them for my own amusement. No money being made and no offense intended.
A/N: Yay, another chapter. And yes I ended the

Comments

[mulder200]

Oh, you are such a tease!

I can't wait for the next part.

[xocoatldreams]

*eg* Either very late tonight or tomorrow at some point. I'm working on it now :D

[xocoatldreams]

I'll try not to take too long. Hopefully by tonight. Hopefully.

[skargasm]

Oh exciting!!!!

[xocoatldreams]

I try :D

[laazikaat]

Great chapter, good to see this continuing.

Some small typos

a messy hazy of pleasure, pain and confusion should that be
a messy haze of pleasure, pain and confusion or a messy hazy picture of pleasure, pain and confusion

When the they entered the room he felt Riley tense

and was more than large enough to fit all of the them comfortably

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

[xocoatldreams]

If all goes well, tonight. It's started and open and staring at me but 2hrs of sleep does not make good writing D:

[sun_hime]

ooooh just reading this now,haven't checked livejournal for while. this looks good,can't wait for more

[xocoatldreams]

Glad you like it. More's coming