Fic: Master Part Four

[xocoatldreams]

Title: Master Part Four
Author: xocoatldreams
Fandom: BtVS
Characters/Pairings: S/X/A, W/T, B/R
Rating: PG
Prompt/Challenge: Chattel
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I don't own. No money being made and no offense intended.
A/N: HI!

Part One | Part Two | Part Three

Comments

[skargasm]

Really pleased to see more of this, and loving your Xander - he's so strong and positive!! Glad Bufy is willing to talk and can see what a liability Riley is being, but what will her decision be?!

[xocoatldreams]

I decided to have the characters all strong and no real in-fighting. No bashing of characters (other than Riley of course) A change for me :D
Riley's reaction to the whole thing is going to be interesting :D

[mieka_writes]

*nods*

makes sense to me...

[xocoatldreams]

Doesn't it just :D

[mieka_writes]

loose cannons need to be controlled one way or another..

[mulder200]

Oh! What a clever idea.

[xocoatldreams]

Glad you liked it.

[laazikaat]

This is good, I'm glad to see more.

A few typos for you cos I just can't help myself, I have a pickiness demon living in my head I think. Shame it's not a creative writing demon :)

He glanced att he at the younger vampire.

He had already called to make sure Buffy was there and that she'd left Riley

the threat that Riley presented would be dealt

can we go into the bad back and talk?

[xocoatldreams]

Since you're the one I beg to beta my works I don't mind you picking at my mistakes :D. And I might even get around to fixing some of them :P

[yanagi_wa]

I do love an in charge Xander. Buffy better make the right decision. Excellent work.

[xocoatldreams]

*hugs* I like strong Xander. Of course, I like fragile Xander too ^-^

It's not really Buffy's decision we have to worry about, it's Riley's. Will he go along with it?