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LJ Idol Friends And Rivals: (An Entry In) The Encyclopedia Of Dreams

Feb 04, 2016 18:41

Breezy warm spring night, moon making shadows just beyond the bedroom window. Time? She shifts and looks at the clock, 12:41. He lays curled into her, his breath warm and slow against the crick of her shoulder. She closes her eyes ( Read more... )

creative nonfiction, lj idol friends/rivals

Comments 24

bleodswean February 5 2016, 01:21:43 UTC

Very clever! I liked your edit into the prompt as a title for this evocative piece. I'm left wondering....

I love how loving the/your male partner is!

xo_kizzy_xo February 5 2016, 11:50:16 UTC

Thank you so much!

It's amazing how one can react to medication, especially when one just happens to have the less common side effects, you know? I can laugh about it now but when this first happened I was absolutely petrified. When the colors became vivid, I made SO stay up with me one night because I refused to believe he couldn't see them.

favoritebean February 5 2016, 05:48:06 UTC

It's amazing how vivid the colors of dreams are.

I enjoyed your piece, and the dynamic between him and her. Even if she doesn't really speak to him, her body language says a whole lot.

xo_kizzy_xo February 5 2016, 11:59:04 UTC

Thank you!

Yeah, "she", I think, is more taken with what's going on than what "he's" doing. That happened IRL too. I never could explain the dark figure. I still can't.

adoptedwriter February 5 2016, 13:23:18 UTC

It sorta crosses 2 prompts between the dream thing and the light/dark thing. I like it. I had an odd reaction to Percocet one time, my dream wasn't so "colorful". LOL

AW

xo_kizzy_xo February 5 2016, 13:30:37 UTC

Wow, I didn't think of that but yeah, I can see where you're coming from :)

I'm like my mother in that I'm very "brittle" when it comes to meds: If there's a wacky side effect out there, I'm liable to have it :p

murielle February 5 2016, 21:14:13 UTC

Wonderful, and frightening at the same time. I wanted to know every bit as much as she, what are you, why have you come, what do you want? You had me hanging on every word. Excellent work!

xo_kizzy_xo February 7 2016, 10:32:25 UTC

Thank you so much!

roina_arwen February 6 2016, 19:53:41 UTC

Very vividly described!

ellison February 7 2016, 02:42:24 UTC

Ooh I like your rainbow-y user icon, roina_arwen! :D

roina_arwen February 7 2016, 04:10:34 UTC

Thank you! I have a bit of an icon addiction... I've got over 300 of them, lol! I call this one Solar Rainbow Flare.

xo_kizzy_xo February 7 2016, 10:32:40 UTC

Thank you!

(love your icon, btw)