Stream of consciousnessesses...es

[xnadex]

Torchwood stream of consciousness piece from four o'clock this morning.

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The three most important men in his life really couldn't have been more different. And yet there was something that connected them all, made them all similar, that went beyond their all knowing him.
It was strength. Strength of mind, and of body. Strength of spirit. Strength

Comments

[kinnetic_slash]

*happy sigh* I really loved that, warm and soft and curious... like a kitten. :P It didn't strike me as disjointed, and I liked the tone; not angsting over choosing between the three but accepting and having a place in his life for all of them.

John was in his past and his present, Ianto in his present and his future, and the Doctor was everywhere until the end of time.

John came to him, he came to the Doctor, and Ianto was always waiting.

Those lines were especially lovely, I adore the contrast of the roles they all have and how they all fit together with Jack. Seriously beautiful.

xox

[xnadex]

Lol, kitten. Yes, my fic is a kitten. Loverly.
Yah, I don't think this one was particularly disjointed or anything. It's just that most of what I'm producing lately sort of is, and it's pretty damn frustrating. I needs inspiration, quick smart!

You chose lines I liked lots, whoo. :)

Damn, I just love these men. Their roles all just seem to fit together, so I thought I'd have a crack at explaining it. Glad you like :D

[imagination55]

I love love love the part about Ianto. It's all so true, I think you got his character and how Jack reacts to him down perfectly. :) ♥

I'd say carry on the aimless writing, 'cos you never know where it may lead. :) (doesn't take own advice lol)

[xnadex]

Ianto! is just awesome anyway. Lol, but I'm super happy you liked the bit about him. He's pretty much my favourite fictional person to explore right now. So it means a lot :)

Ha, aimless writing is weird. It's cool, but I always seem to forget halfway through what I was actually writing about XD

TAKE YOUR OWN ADVICE CAPPPSSSSSSLOCK SMILEY FACE.

[frogglesthefrog]

I don't read really any Dr Who fic, even though I love thes show like whoa, and I've only seen a very little of Torchwood, which is crazy because so many people seem to LOVE IT! And I do love JB and Ianto is quite pretty indeed, but I really, really like this!!!

It was warm and soft and there was all the contrast but I love a good bit of contrast and it all seems to fit together really well!! I love it! :)

[crimson_bubafly]

this is really nice and for some reason kjhfg i thought claire had written it at first

[sinful_teddy]

kinnetic_slash said it all, dude.
Second last paragraph's my fave.

...Can't write when tired