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A Scrap of the Past (Logan/Mystique - rated: teen)

Sep 23, 2007 00:15

Title: A Scrap of the Past
Author: ladydraherm (eldee)
Rating: Teen
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me and no profit is being made.
Written for: resolute
Pairing/Scenario requested: Logan and Mystique (any time frame) - secrets, their history as lovers or enemies or both, Mystique's past before the Brotherhood.
Words: 3670
Summary: Logan runs into someone ( Read more... )

logan/wolverine, het, raven darkholme/mystique

Comments 18

resolute September 23 2007, 05:56:05 UTC

oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh you are AWES

Um. With IRENE, and with the cure failing, and with the school, and Jones and COLOSSUS and all of it.

Um.

yay. Thank you, Eldee!!

eldee September 23 2007, 15:25:14 UTC

Yay, you liked it!

\o/

I love to randomly write in Jones and his glasses. He's so cute!

You're very welcome, Res!! I'm so glad you liked. :)

lonelywalker September 23 2007, 11:21:54 UTC

Yay for Logan and the Never-Ending Quest For Beer ;-)

eldee September 23 2007, 15:26:16 UTC

*nods* The man enjoys his beer.

jamaillith September 23 2007, 14:10:33 UTC

Oooh, yes. I particularly like the evasiveness, how Raven dangles his past in front of him but doesn't let him see everything. I kinda like how we don't find out exactly what happened between them.

eldee September 23 2007, 15:27:39 UTC

Yes. I thought that if Logan doesn't get to know, then his readers don't. Poor Logan. *pets him*

Thanks!

willowaus September 23 2007, 16:59:39 UTC

:claps delightedly:

So much love for this and Raven and the way she doesn't quite give him what he wants. So very, very her! And Destiny! There was talk of Destiny!!!

Poor Logan.

eldee September 23 2007, 17:36:27 UTC

Yay! Coming from you, any praise of Mystique is honouring! And I soooo thought of you when I was writing in the Destiny parts. :D

Thanks! Glad you liked.

trascendenza September 23 2007, 21:23:27 UTC

Wow.

This is such a compelling read. The push and pull between Logan and Raven kept me hooked through every scene. And the attention to the small details--Raven using that perfume, the backstory--so nicely woven in.

Also, I just have to add that these two bits made me laugh out loud:

...and making stupid jokes about why his hair pointed up into tips the way it did.

...'more of an asshat ' than usual.

*grins* Oh, Logan. This is precisely why I adore you!

And the whole ending... especially Marie just putting her hand on his arm--that wrenched. The last two lines were just the perfect note to conclude on.

Wonderfully done!

eldee October 1 2007, 03:28:54 UTC

Wow. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!