The One of Fictive Music

Jul 01, 2005 12:54

Author: hyelle_narmo
Title: The One of Fictive Music
Rating: Maybe PG for scary elements, but that's it
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit, just long hours of typing and plotting.
Summary: Hallucinations aren't always not what they seem.
Written for: hbrogan
Pairing/scenario requested: Scott/Jean. Specific request: Scott's seeing/hearing things. Is it Jean's ghost? A ( Read more... )

jean grey, scott summers/cyclops, het

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wanderlustlover July 1 2005, 13:46:16 UTC
Beautiful, tragic and creepy. This is amazing. And added to my memories.

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liangzhu July 2 2005, 22:51:57 UTC
Thank you! Initially I think it was supposed to be less creepy and more fluffy (like, the ghost as a benevolent force), but then, well. I'm bad with the fluff. :P

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lunarknightz July 1 2005, 14:42:02 UTC
Wow.

This was great. Beautiful, yet tragic, and I loved how you brought in parts of Endsong into this. And having Phoenix! Emma? Wow, just wow.

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liangzhu July 2 2005, 22:53:00 UTC
Glad you liked it. Endsong just wormed itself into my brain, somehow.

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liangzhu July 2 2005, 22:54:55 UTC
Not being good with twists that aren't broadcast in the first few sentences, this makes me happy. And the Dani thing got me out of bed Friday morning - it was an, "So, have to finish the fic, what to do... oh!" sort of moment.

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seemag July 7 2005, 16:42:12 UTC
I like this very much. The poem is very effective in breaking up the story, but mostly I like the way Scott backs off from the 'memory' of Jean and makes a conscious decision to move on. Creepy twist at the end too. Very nice.

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