Mind's Eye

[xmindthegapx]

Title:  Mind's Eye
Fandom:  Harry Potter
Pairing:  Remus/Sirius.  Well, sort of.
Rating:  PG-13
Wordcount:  3438
Warnings:  Angst? Fluff? Together? I think so.
Disclaimer:  The Harry Potter series is owned by J. K. Rowling, Warner Brothers, and Scholastic. Not me. Also, this is Shoebox-inspired on some demented level.
Dedication:  For the fanfiction

Comments

[aquila_star]

Wow. That was very emotional. I cried with Remus at the end. Well Done.

[xmindthegapx]

Oh, thank you!

[willfully]

ARGH! Damn you! That was a beautiful, deadly, emotional rollercoaster of a story!

*is heart broken for Remus*

In case you couldn't tell, that's my way of saying I loved it. *wails*

[xmindthegapx]

Aw, yay! I will not be flinging myself off a cliff now.

Thank you very much!

[solidbaby]

I love how Remus was sad, but not semi-suicidal and just OTT as some people make him in this period. He's just mourning the way that I think he would.

The dreams were achingly sad, especially the last one. I knew he was dreaming, but just when it says 'And then Remus wakes up again', and about him still feeling content, that just broke my heart.

Amazing over all!

Oh yes, and your BOP background made me smile!

[xmindthegapx]

BoP is fab!

And thank you! (I cannnot say that enough, apparently)

I based the last dream off dreams that I have had. Not with Sirius coming back to life (that would be odd) but the waking up and feeling like the dream is real and then realizing that it's not. It's a horrible feeling.

[sensiblemaniac]

Wow, you had me at tears. Then, I was happy. Then, crying again. I've read a lot of fics in my time, but few have actually made me cry. That was amazing.

[xmindthegapx]

You have no idea how happy your crying makes me. Not because you're crying, that's a little sad, but that something I wrote could make anyone cry. Ack. Thank you so very much.

[sensiblemaniac]

Your are so welcome.
PS - Your icon makes me happy. =D

[hahahahowlucky]

mmm. . .oh, I just started to like post Azkaban slash and you are fueling my obsession! Agh.
Lovely. Just. . .God. Lovely.
I'm pretty much incompetent when it comes to describing how I feel about other people's work. Which is why the world lovely is the only word coming out of my mouth right now.
Also, THIS LINE: It is a large, unmanly looking thing with feet.
I don't know why that caught my eye so quickly, but it did. That line is just perfect. For no real reason, I think, but it's humorous in the face of angst.

[xmindthegapx]

I have always wanted a bathtub with feet. I don't very well know why.

Reading your comment gave me a goofy grin that I will undoubtedly be wearing for the rest of the day! Thank you!