Icarus

[xmindthegapx]

Title: Icarus
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 3547
Warnings: Angst, disgustingly disgusting fluffy fluff, smoking, language, and a terrible inability of the author to write sex, thereby resulting in something incredibly vague.
Disclaimer: Hello. I am JK Rowling and I own Harry Potter. This completely explains why

Comments

[sapphirestar_]

oh, so very lovely. i adore how it's written, and it's almost detached in a sense that only makes the story so more touching. and the not-wanting-to-be-left-behind part, just oh, and remus remus remus, he and the ending kind of broke my heart.

also, i totally agree with you on the jensen thing. because, um. YES. :D

[cac2372]

Wonderful! I love the writing style of the story. Especially the way you fit flashbacks in without loosing the flow of the story. Very smooth.

My favorite line:
"The sun decided to pull the petals away from her face and raise her yellow pollen head to a blushing sky."

Just struck me.

[tresa_cho]

Wow, that was absolutely amazing. I love your prose and the way you invoke such emotion. Incredible. (Though your background was a bit distracting... with him staring at me while I read... 0.o)

[shoebox_addict]

I really really liked this. Well done!

[carmine_ink]

This is such a lovely piece of writing, and you have some really gorgeous bits of prose in here. My favourite is:

With stiff arms and necks, the gray buildings around pulled themselves upwards, sprouting heads from the snow like concrete daisies.

Gahh, I love that. I also adore this bit:

"Fuck you," Remus said, grabbing Sirius shirt and shaking him weakly. "Lie to me."

...because it just seems so desperate and very much like the Remus I envision. Awesomeness all around. :D