Forbidden Fruit and Broken Hearts

Nov 14, 2008 14:31



Title: Forbidden Fruit and Broken Hearts

Rating: R

Pairing: Elisa/Patrick,Ashlee/Pete,Pete/Elisa, Patrick/Ashlee

Warnings: Angst, drama, character death, pregnancy scene and swearing.

Author: Me! (Xmexandxyoux)

Summary: But how was he going to tell Pete that he wanted to be there when his wife was giving birth to Patrick’s baby?

Diclaimer: I do not own ( Read more... )

olivia rae, patrick stump, elisa, pete wentz, ashlee simpson, stumplee, wentzlee

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shattered_ink November 16 2008, 05:19:43 UTC
1: I love the title.
2: Holy. Effing. Crap. THAT WAS INSANITY OF THE BEST KIND. I was feeling bad for Elisa, then I wasn't, then I was feeling bad for Patrick, then I was thinking that Aubrey seems cool, then I was feeling bad for Pete as always, then I felt bad for Elisa again. This *would* be a good soap opera!

xD

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xmexandxyoux November 16 2008, 16:23:33 UTC
Thank you, deary!
Hehe, yes, it was insane.
It was a total lose/lose for everybody.
But I think the only way it could end less tragic is if Olivia grew up thinking that Patrick was her father, even if they might not necesarily be together.
In essence, Pete not existing was sort of better for everyone.
Sorry if I just totally bored you. xD

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shattered_ink November 16 2008, 18:28:43 UTC
Haha, poor Pete. Though it *would* be tragic to see how he'd handle raising a little girl... xD

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xmexandxyoux November 16 2008, 16:20:34 UTC
Thank you, bb!
No,no more.

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anonymous November 18 2008, 05:42:00 UTC
holy shit! that's like Pete's worst fear. To die in a plane crash or something haha

What if the copper hair was patrick's? After all his hair isn't getting anything thicker, if you get my drift.*cough* His hair is thinning.*cough* Haha

Everytime there is a fic involing a Patrick baby, it's olivia. Did he choose that name or something? Fill me in.

Anyway, I loved this.

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xmexandxyoux November 18 2008, 13:25:59 UTC
1. I totally did not plan that.
2. Subtlity is not your strong suit...
It was long and the color of Ashlee's.
3. Omg, really?
That's hilarious.
No, I just happen to like that name.
4. Thanks you!

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