Charles/Erik closeted small town BIG ASS PROMPTqueen_subtleSeptember 17 2011, 07:22:05 UTC
So Charles grows up in a very conservative small town, where he's struggling with being a homosexual. He is embarassed by it, and thinks he's the only one. Cue the angry farmer's son Erik, one of the most popular kids at school, star football player or some other stereotypical douche position. Charles is envious of him because he seems to have the perfect life and he is what Charles wishes he could be--manly manly. So he can never figure out why he's so angry. And why he seems to hate him. He develops a crush he tries to hide, but eventually the two get alone and Erik takes in totally hot angry man shmex.(Um, I want them to be seniors so they don't have to be underage, but if you choose not to, whatevs) Charles' feelings only grow stronger, but Erik hates being this way and denies his attraction towards him, all the time repeatedly using him for angry sex. Charles of course, is stressed out by this and eventually wants to leave him, but although Erik is in the closet, is growing increasingly possessive. Whether or not Erik finds out
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Fill: Restlessly in My Mind 1/?queen_subtleOctober 8 2011, 04:16:09 UTC
[Hi, um, same anon from before, with the book. This ... may have deviated from the prompt, and it will likely be slowly written since it's gone in a slightly different direction than what I intended, but I hope it's not too off the mark?]The last year of high school promises change. Charles has worked to keep his grades up, to do everything within his power to guarantee that he'll be able to get into a college that's as far away as possible. He's romanticized the idea in his head - an ideal, a dream he clings to, not out of naivety, but out of a desperate need for hope. It will be a fresh start, a new beginning in which he isn't alone, and he isn't hopelessly infatuated with someone who hates him
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Fill: Restlessly in My Mind 2/?queen_subtleOctober 8 2011, 04:19:33 UTC
Charles runs track after school. His mind reaches a state of calm as his body falls into the natural, easy rhythm of circling the quarter mile loop. The coach thinks it's dedication though that keeps Charles long after the required practice and has stopped trying to herd Charles in with the rest of the track team. He doesn't correct this assumption
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OP is having the ultimate fangasmqueen_subtleOctober 8 2011, 06:08:50 UTC
OH. MY.
GAWD. I', hypervenitalting over here. My sister thinks I'm a maniac. This. My dear. Is fucking glorious This made my day. Everything--the characterizations the setting, their interactions, everything is how I hoped it would be and more. I need to have more of this soon. The locker room was so fucking tense and hawt and the angst is like omgfksbjdbfkjakfajfkdsfmfjkskfhkjfhkjdshkjfh
Emma as his popular cheerleader girlfriend, the family problems and sfkdfkahfkjdjsbfjkafjbjabjbfdjsb
I am a mess right now. A fucking mess. I know you prolly don't have that much time on your hands but please, I beg of you I need more this is like the shit! This is glorious, and I can't wait to see where you take it. And I think I have the faintest inkling about Cain.
And Charles masturbating adjklsajdklsajkldnksa
And Omggggg Erik guhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
please, please PLEASE try to update as quickly as you can. This is like my crack right now.
Re: OP is having the ultimate fangasmqueen_subtleOctober 17 2011, 08:37:39 UTC
alkjg; OH WOW. THIS COMMENT. ♥ I am extremely flattered! And very, very glad that all of these things are working for you. (Slightly facepalming and apologizing for any writing flubs, since that is the pitfall of not being able to edit comments.)
I should have more of it up today/tomorrow! I'll try to not be too slow, but this is pretty different than what I typically write, so I don't want to fuck it up (and I'm juggling it, hopefully successfully, with a couple other things I'm writing). :D
Re: OP is having the ultimate fangasmqueen_subtleOctober 18 2011, 01:45:00 UTC
I'm glad you're glad! It's just ilove this so much. When you do update though, just know that I'm stalking the hell out of you on my phone though--idk when I'll be able to get back on the net. But I think you're doing more than fine,and I'm extremely excited for your next update! :)
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I am so curious to know what made them drift apart in the first place.
And I think their is more to this Cain thing. I cannot wait
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GAWD.
I', hypervenitalting over here. My sister thinks I'm a maniac. This. My dear. Is fucking glorious This made my day. Everything--the characterizations the setting, their interactions, everything is how I hoped it would be and more. I need to have more of this soon. The locker room was so fucking tense and hawt and the angst is like omgfksbjdbfkjakfajfkdsfmfjkskfhkjfhkjdshkjfh
Emma as his popular cheerleader girlfriend, the family problems and sfkdfkahfkjdjsbfjkafjbjabjbfdjsb
I am a mess right now. A fucking mess. I know you prolly don't have that much time on your hands but please, I beg of you I need more this is like the shit! This is glorious, and I can't wait to see where you take it. And I think I have the faintest inkling about Cain.
And Charles masturbating adjklsajdklsajkldnksa
And Omggggg Erik guhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
please, please PLEASE try to update as quickly as you can. This is like my crack right now.
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I've read this about five times in a row now. And the count is growing.
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I should have more of it up today/tomorrow! I'll try to not be too slow, but this is pretty different than what I typically write, so I don't want to fuck it up (and I'm juggling it, hopefully successfully, with a couple other things I'm writing). :D
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