Tightly Wound

[xmaspterodactyl]

Title: Tightly Wound (1/1)
Author: Christmas Pterodactyl
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 3,901 words
Disclaimer: The author makes no claims of ownership to any material that may be recognized by the public.
Spoilers: Through the end of Season 2
Summary: Orange paint isn’t healthy for the epidermis.
Author’s Notes: eleventhimpala just had to

Comments

[crittab]

I think you may be from the same planet as Dan Harmon.

I loved it... in fact, I think this may be how the show ends.

[x_avecia_x]

IAWTC :)

[xmaspterodactyl]

I appreciate the compliment, and glad ya enjoyed the story.

[xmaspterodactyl]

Thank you for the compliment. Sincerely.

And while it would be an interesting way to end the show, I'd hope not, because killing Annie was NOT an easy thing to do.

[eleventhimpala]

Thanks so much! :D

This was grand, and I loved the sweet ending.

[xmaspterodactyl]

I circumvented your Asimov.

Yes, I'm just that awesome.

Your welcome though. Glad you enjoyed it.

[classicfreak]

I used to understand the world (or so I thought) and now I'll be contemplating this on everyone. /dead

[xmaspterodactyl]

What can I say, I just like messing with people's minds.
Thanks again for reading.

[classicfreak]

Well, you'd def. wrinkled the shit out of my brain. Can't thank you enough :)

[fangirl_101]

This is awesome. I loved it!

[xmaspterodactyl]

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the read.

[krystal214]

This was so cool and a very fun way to answer that Ficcy prompt. I really enjoyed this. It kind of reminded me of the movie Disturbing Behavior where they alter the kids, but instead there was more of a Bionic Woman/AI quality. I liked this a lot.

I actually had a guilty pleasure moment of extending this in my imagination to include Jeff and Annie sharing a curious look after having overheard the guard say that Alfa Echo and Juliet Whiskey just passed the front gate. Get it... Jeff got roboted up too. Maybe he fainted at the sight of robot Annie and suffered such a head trauma from hitting the floor that they had no choice but to do the same procedure to ensure the continued happiness of Alfa Echo, you know, since she loves him and everything.

Sorry and I meant no offense by playing with your idea, but sometimes my imagination gets away from me and I feel the need to share. This was such a fun story to share. Thanks.

[xmaspterodactyl]

Thanks. And you didn't offend. I can't remember who wrote it, but the story of Jeff and Annie being immortal always got me thinking about additional tales. That and the "Jeff as the Master" fic where they explore the stars always made me daydream about their adventures.