[fic] Feast of the Senses [5/5]

[xmachina_writes]

title: Feast of the Senses
chapter: 5/5
author: Cross (xmachina_writes)
rating: NC-17 overall
genre: PWP
pairings: Ni~yaxAoi, JaeHo, Ni~ya/Yunho, Ni~yaxJaejoong, AoixJaejoong, Jaejoong/Changmin, Ni~yaxAoixJaejoongxYunho, AoixChangmin, Ni~yaxChangminxAoi

Comments

[theresa_lynne]

That was quite a pleasing read. Finally Changmin got his turn. Ah, so what next? :D

[xmachina_writes]

So now I take a break to recharge my batteries and then ... probably lots of Changmin whumping. Because I'm mean to Yujji's favourites. XD

[seungjea]

awww ... changmin comes out and play!
i love how you write uke! aoi and seme! min ... i never thought of this pairing before but i am hooked!
and ... you're right, aoi IS a natural porn star ^^
i'm waiting to see more!!

[xmachina_writes]

Thank you. It'll be awhile before there's any more, but...

[elfling_eryn]

The flavour of this was just perfect
A mix of spice and suggar and a distantly bitter flavour.
But it made a wonderful piece of art^^

I really like the way it ended, the last sentence giving it the perfect finishing touch.
And I wonder if you'll write any more Ni~yaxAoi
*curious desu*
*gives cookies*
Keep it up!

[xmachina_writes]

Well, we'll have to see how things pan out. With lots of Changmin whumping on the distant horizon, well....

[kestral_kitsune]

ooooo there should be anther to this.. like an after shock or consequence thing XD

[xmachina_writes]

I need to take a break for a bit to recharge the batteries, but after that ... yeah, this has turned itself into a fic series. *kicks Minnie in the shins* So yeah ... eventually there will be more.

[kestral_kitsune]

-woooot- dance dance

[psmlostsoul]

huh...
this fic is kinda nice too in a sick way...
srry
cause i'm maybe a little prude?