The Fate of a One-Man Shower

Dec 07, 2004 23:09

the willow tree is the first
to grow leaves in spring time.
she extends her flowing vines
to meet the freshly thawed ground,
ready for the sun to shine.

leafing through my yellow scrapbook,
i come to the void
in my life that is you.i remember the time ( Read more... )

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asmileforsin December 8 2004, 04:19:59 UTC
I love you and I'm here for you.
This is a wonderful poem,a nd I'mg lad you got to use the willow tree imagery you wanted to use. it's a beautiful and poignant image.

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xluckiestx December 8 2004, 04:30:51 UTC
Why thank you for your comment and your compassion. But this poem, although based in fact, went off on it's own tangent. We are still together. Sorry to have made you (or anyone else that happens to read this) think otherwise.

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asmileforsin December 8 2004, 22:56:10 UTC
hrmm...well, Ic ould justc all you a bitch, but instead I'll just tell you that your userpic scares me.

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xibreak4emox December 8 2004, 04:49:23 UTC
i hate you. i cried. i was going to call you like the last time you and brendan broke up for pretend.

but now i will not speak to you on purpose for approximately three days or until i am no longer sad about this.

love,
dara

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