Insatiable

[xlovebecomesher]

Heh - after months of working on this fic, I'm finally finished! Yes I know I'm a dork for writing Harry Potter fan fics (actually Draco/Ginny) but I don't care. This is my first one ever, so hope you like

Comments

[gianfared]

dragonsmistress pointed me in this direction, being the D/G lover that I am, and let me say that was HAWT! D/G luv with Hawt!Sex is oh so yummy!

*fans self*

You are not a dork for writing HP fan fic, especially D/G! I hope to see much more D/G over here! :D

More. :D

[xlovebecomesher]

w00t *does a little dance* glad you like! Does it need any changes or anything, any suggestions? Do you think people would read?

I started reading your DGW - very addicting! I'm only on chapter 7 now, but I'm planning to catch up and leave some comments then lol. Mind if I add you, you seem like a pretty cool person :)

[gianfared]

Off hand, I didn't notice anything that needed changes and to be perfectly honest, I tend to notice grammatical errors. I think people would read it. The only thing I would suggest is that you reconsider the transition from not trusting one another to trusting each other. It was a great leap of faith on her part. I don't doubt it could happen, but it did seem a bit much considering she was still handcuffed (but I like the handcuffs, the magical unlocking).

I'm glad you're reading DGW. It is not beta read and a bit rough, but we're having fun, right? :D

Add me, and I'll add you back. Cool cats need to stick together. ;P

[anonymous]

Heh...do you have any idea how incredibly nerdy that is?
Proud breasts. That's a good one. Proud is a good description.
You naughty girl. ; )
--crzydroid

[xlovebecomesher]

haha yay it's Joe!!
Damn straight am I naughty ;) but yet ever so nerdy lol!

Hahaha

[no_regrets__]

"flicked her clit"

LMAO Hillz.... hmm k. :)