Horizon OS Luna Sea RyuichixSugizo, JxSugizo Pt. 2

[xlostheavenx]

Title: Horizon
Author: xlostheavenx
Ratings: R
Bands: LUNA SEA
Pairings: RyuichixSugizo/SugizoxRyuichi, JxSugizo
Synopsis: It all started with a smile, or maybe it was a glance, or maybe a touch. He liked to think it was one of those things and not a bottle of some cheap vodka that he picked up just because of the price and availability. Disclaimer: Don’t

Comments

[operaxghost]

Soooooooo that was utterly beautiful. I was crying by the end. *gets overly emotional when reading*

I love reading your fics. The way you write makes me really feel like I'm somehow connected to the characters. I love that, I really do. :)

[xlostheavenx]

Aw, I'm sorry for making you cry lol

I got pretty emotional writing this at time lol ^^

I'm happy you can relate to my stories because I try hard to get them that way. <3

Thank you so much for reading! And I'm very happy you enjoyed it!!

<3

[larylara]

Wow, that took some time to read to be a oneshot, but I enjoyed every paragraph nonetheless, besides we don't see well-written LUNA SEA fics posted everyday (or any kind of LS fic for that matter, hee)

I liked it so much I don't even know where to start <333 Anyway, let's try...

The way you switched between past and future was quite a nice factor, you had me guessing which year it was and the situation everyone was in - it was actually fun XD

The memories were so bittersweet and seemed so real I had to mentally slap myself into reality in order not to cry everytime I read one. Of course, at end (when Sugizo and Ryuich meet at the park, to be more specific) I couldn't help myself :3... lol, I was quite the sight at 4:00 in the morning.Ah, I loved the flow... everything seemed to flow so naturally, from the dialogue to the narrative, not forced at all. And your characterization was really good, too

[xlostheavenx]

Wow, thank you very much lol. I don't really know where to start either. heh

[larylara]

Really? X Japan/Luna Sea fic? That would be all kinds of wonderful *____* I'm SO looking forward to that - and the LS one of course <333

[charlene_grand]

Wow!! That's beautiful!! Really!!
Thanks for it.
Keep on writing Luna Sea fanfiction because you did a great job on it!! <3

[xlostheavenx]

aw, thank you very very much!
and you're very welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! <3

I'm in the middle of posting a X JAPAN/LUNA SEA/Dir en grey fic right now, but as for just Luna Sea, I'm working on a OS which will be done soon, and then a hide and Sugizo fic!

thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!!
<3<3

[charlene_grand]

No, thank YOU very very much!! <3
There is only one tiny thing disturbing me during reading your precious fic - Sugizo-uke and uke with Ryuichi o.O I actually can't imagine Ryuichi being seme with Sugi (or anyone else XDD).. but it's just my opinion ^^
SxR is my favourite pairing and I've read a lot of stuff about them but there's a few fics really worth paying attention to. And yours is definitely one of them :))))
Excuse my curiosity but what is OS meaning?? and what pairing it includes if it includes any?? ^^

[xlostheavenx]

lol yes Uke Sugizo...
Actually Sugi in this is also Seme, it was just the scene I wrote for it, he happened to be uke. I figure most of the time he tops but since he was teasing he had to be taught a lesson lol. but i guess thats not obvious to everyone else, just me in my head heh.

OS is One Shot, so it's not gonna be a chaptered fic ^^
The pairings right now are...... SugizoxInoran, JxInoran and SugizoxRyuichi.
I somehow became obsessed with how SugizoxInoran would work lol, and my friend pointed out that in my X fic, I have almost SugixIno, but I just didn't go there lol (So now I have heh)

and thank you, I'm very honored that you think this is worth paying attention to, and I will be writing more SugixRyu in the future lol
<3<3

[charlene_grand]

Most of the time? Oh, sorry, I didn't get it ^^ Just need to read this fic once more to put such things on the right places XD

SugizoxInoran? o.O You actually not a type of fic-writer who sticks with the traditional pairings, are you? XDD
Can you let me know.. uh when any of yours fics with Luna Sea's participation will appear in your journal, pretty please?
"and I will be writing more SugixRyu in the future"
Yes, world need more _excellent_ SxR fanfiction!! ;))

[xlostheavenx]

lol I wouldn't worry about it, you can't really tell in the fic heh I probably should have made it a bit clearer.

Most of the time I don't post to my journal lol, but here are the links to the ones that have LS in them ^^

Magnificent Desolation (X JAPAN//LUNA SEA//Dir en grey)
.:. Part One: J.:. Part Two: Kaoru.:. Part Three: hide.:. Part Four: Toshi.:. Part Five: INORAN .:. Part Six: Sugizo.:. Part Seven: Yoshiki.:.

This one is almost done, I'm posting the last part tmr.

and Bonded Infidelity (SugizoxSaga, ToraxSaga ((I know totally messed up lol)))
Part 1.:. Part 2.:. Part 3 Part 4

I am writing an alternate ending to it, which has all of LS in it, it's about half done so it should be up soon ^^

Those are the only 2 so far with LS in them

As for pairing, sometimes I like to play around with them hehe, it helps me know my muses better lol
And I'll let you know when other stuff is up too
<3

[terashii]

Sorry to randomnly comment on your fics, but I wanted to know if you have MSN, I need to speak to you. 8D

[xlostheavenx]

hahah no problem

yeah i do its deathbyrock @ hotmail.com ^^