Chapter Eighteen, "Baby"

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Chapter 18, "Baby"

CHRISTOPHEREveryone reacted immediately, leaping up and rushing around, trying to figure out what to do. Frig screeched and wailed as more goo and slime streamed from every imaginable fold. The floor quickly flooded with the stuff. Frig's screams and everyone's

Comments

[miz_witch]

This chapter is so amazing. I laughed, I cried, I fell in love. Well, not really (the love part). I really like how you get to see the baby from a lot of different points of view, it really enhances the entire scene. I must say though that I am disappointed that Frig didn't stay all alien-y.

Oh, and Wendy Elizabeth Marcus Jehosaphat O'Flannery Xlormpstilouserdash. Best. Name. Ever. Renesme, eat your heart out.

[anonymous]

Awww, little Wemjox is so cute!

In more important matters: Major suspense about Lou!

LOVE the chapter!

-Rachel

ps- please can we call it Wemjox?

[anonymous]

Wemjox.

...
That is amazing.

I second this.

[meepbitch]

Thirded!

[summer_breeze01]

Your icon is win!

[lizren697]

that name is beautiful. just beautiful.

also, lou is my favorite ever. i've decided.

[nzanon]

This is the last of the multi-perspective chapters, isn't it? Now we go back to Frig's crazed mind. I will miss the relevant sanity of the other characters. INCLUDING LOU! I wonder how he randomly regained his brain-to-mouth coordination.

And Wemjox, how precious, it sounds like a little cleaning product :)

[nzanon]

I CANNOT wait to find out about Lou. Thanks for reminding me of my mental agony! :-)

-Rachel

[nzanon]

Anytime! Haha. Glad to see you back, too. :)

[nzanon]

Thanks! *feels special*

-Rachel

[tallybonker]

rofl, Wemjox is such a cute name for an alien-human baby!
Great chapter *-*