Fic: Nothing Happens Accidently

[xlivvielockex]

Title: Nothing Happens Accidently
Author: xlivvielockex
Characters/Pairing: Kendall Casablancas, Keith Mars
Word Count: 4,884
Rating: PG13
Spoilers: Not Pictured and Welcome Wagon
Summary: AU after Not Pictured with information from Welcome Wagon. Kendall asks Keith to help her get out of town.
A/N: Written for the gogetem_bobcat Road Trippin! challenge. Thank you to boy_named_susie for

Comments

[oceandreams]

When I saw your icon, I was like, what the hell is Cordy doing with Veronica's dad??! LOL

[xlivvielockex]

LOL Well, where Charisma goes, so I go. Hence loving her on Veronica Mars as Kendall Casablancas. I can't help it, I just think she and Keith would be hot together.

[dacian_goddess]

Hee! By the time I got round to reading this fic, I'd forgot which comm I had followed the link from. Namely, I thought I'd come in from one of the Veronica/Logan comms I watch -- and thus enjoyed a good few minutes of confusion over what I'd read vs what I'd been expecting.

Enough of the babble, though. OK; so ... This fic? Phenomenal pacing. Loved the premise, set-up, overall dynamic and character interaction.

You do tremendous character voices. Your Kendall was spectacular; she had so much presence she practically leapt out of the screen, and her dialogue was so spot-on that I could just hear her speak as I was reading. Keith was no less terrific -- from the progressively thawing initial awkwardness of his interaction with Mrs C to his actions and reactions.

And the plotty progression of the narrative was great to read through!

[xlivvielockex]

Thank you so much for the fantastic feedback. This comment was just so much awesome, you have no idea.

I know that the majority of the VM fandom is LoVe but I don't know, I just like to explore the secondary characters of the show a lot more. I think because there is so much writing about LoVe.

I am just really glad that you stumbled across my fic, even by accident, and left me such amazing feedback. I wrote it because mainly, Kendall and Keith's voices were stuck in my head, screaming WRITE US! I wasn't expecting any comments at all so yours, was like this super great surprise. So thank you. :)

[love_is_epic]

Normally I don't read much that isn't LoVe but I wanted to read all the fics for the gogetem_bobcat road trippin! challenge before I voted. I'm glad I did because this fic was great and it was a change of pace for me.

I think you have Kendall's voice down perfectly. I could actually hear her saying everything that you wrote. And I really liked the idea of them on a roadtrip together. I could see this happening.

Great job!