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xlilviscious

SiChul: Entitled

Mar 06, 2012 11:24

Title: Entitled
Starring: Siwon/Heechul
Rating: G
Genre: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Slash
Words: 1,142
A/N: Written for foreverstrange @ deviantart

( They just weren’t on the same page, their wavelengths were different and when he was finally fed up with Siwon he pointed a finger to the biggest difference between them instead of speaking the truth. )

sichul, heechul, siwon

Comments 4

bling_chullie March 6 2012, 16:09:06 UTC

this was so well written, but i didn't like it. Well, I did, but it was sooo sad...T.T

xlilviscious March 6 2012, 17:31:56 UTC

Ghe well it is Angst as stated above ^^" thanks for leaving a comment =]

macootha March 6 2012, 20:44:50 UTC

Thank you Siwon????..*breaths*

What is he...really shisus? Even in the moment his love breaks up with him he manages to foresee whats better for him and then accept it. Just like that and... fast? Every human would cling, cry, be fucking angry..no not siwon. He says thank you.

This story would not go with any other character then siwon. But since it is Siwon Im willing to believe it even it is not understandable for me. I lack that faith in god ;)
Anyway. I waited for a really good SiChul fic about exactly that theme and Im glad that wait has an end now.
Thanks for writing. As u can see it made me think and then actually write a comment, which is maybe one of the longest I've written so far, so pls dont hate me now :D Im not good with words and dont mean to be rude and maybe I didnt get it at all anyway kkkk ;)

xlilviscious March 6 2012, 23:00:04 UTC

Hello, no need to worry I'm not offended or anything. Many will share your opinion I suppose and that's just fine, however, while I was writing this I wanted to focus on both characters realizing that even though they cared for each other, this was not a healthy basis for a longterm relationship. So in the end when Heechul decided to leave because Siwon had given too much, Siwon realized exactly that and started allowing himself to receive. That's why he said thank you. I hope that makes more sense ^^ Thank you for the comment, I am always delighted to read them, especially long ones, haha!