Comments | xj_t: [Sups/Bats]Everything was right again

xj_t

[Sups/Bats]Everything was right again

Jan 22, 2011 01:05

Gee what is this...a...a fic?
Me? Writing? A fic? Something is wrong here...lol
Ok, enough self doubt. Here's my first fanfic written in English, just something short. It was inspired by a prompt from WFGE, which I drew an illustration for...oh, and unbeta-ed...so if there's anything that needs fixing, just tell me *u*

( It took what seemed ages... )

fanfic, sups/bats

Comments 21

lilacs_roses January 22 2011, 06:48:04 UTC

Needs a little beta but, considering English isn't your native language, this was nicely written. Tender and beautiful. Well done :)

xj_t January 22 2011, 16:31:22 UTC

Thank you!
Probably going to tweak it here and there :D

ladyblkrose January 22 2011, 08:23:18 UTC

Wow, Engilsh is not your first language? Well you did a wonderful job with this short bit of love and fear and recovery. The hug was very tender.
Thank you for sharing this with us.

xj_t January 22 2011, 16:32:31 UTC

Nope, I'm Chinese...haha...
Glad you like this! <3

gogglehead84 January 22 2011, 13:00:07 UTC

Aww, I'm glad Clark survived! Where was the illustration for this?

xj_t January 22 2011, 16:33:28 UTC

http://xj-t.livejournal.com/3116.html
Here it is!
Thank you for commenting!

gogglehead84 January 22 2011, 16:46:33 UTC

Ok, I remember that one! Nice work :D. Hope to see more.

quiltdiva January 22 2011, 13:34:53 UTC

Awww, this was sweet and touching. I enjoyed it very much! Bravo!

xj_t January 22 2011, 16:34:19 UTC

Thank you very much!>8D

bradygirl_12 January 22 2011, 18:22:11 UTC

Nicely done! You had all the emotions in play: love, fear, sacrifice, relief...glad it all turned out well! :)

xj_t January 23 2011, 03:19:00 UTC

Thank you!
Glad to know the emotions came through >8D