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GRRRRR fucking GRRRRr firehead30 February 13 2007, 15:31:19 UTC
Darlin, I will read this weekend. Am swamped and no way I can concentrate on this huge pile of work unless I focus...and Jesus threeway with Justin, Ares and Brian......*thud kerplunk* am dead.....what was I talking about???oh yeah you said somehting about Vamphile inspired muses. I must get back to work now.

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Re: GRRRRR fucking GRRRRr xie_xie_xie February 13 2007, 20:54:15 UTC
It is so wrong that our jobs interfere with our fandom activities. So very wrong.

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herberta2006 February 13 2007, 17:22:51 UTC
Brian/Justin/Ares? GENIUS! I'm so glad you gave in to us :D:D:D

And the triumphant return of Bunny Happenshatz! As the kickassiest lawyer around, she's bound to get Justin back to Brian. After all, that's how it's meant to be.

Love it :D

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xie_xie_xie February 13 2007, 20:53:44 UTC
I KNOW! Bringing Bunny back was a sheer stroke of genius on my part! Snort.

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flamencanyc February 13 2007, 19:39:14 UTC
Can't wait to read tonight! More B/J X/G! And Ares! Yay!
Kevin Smith was so fucking hot... but then, to paraphrase my favorite big nelly bottom... when I see pics of him, I don't know whether to jerk off or weep...

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xie_xie_xie February 13 2007, 20:51:20 UTC
LOL, yes, he's a hunk of burning love.

If you're into that kind of thing. ;)

Xie

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testdog65 February 13 2007, 20:03:17 UTC
Whoa. Those two opening scenes were just - holy shit! First a dream sandwich and then a sleepy but intense early morning fuck. Not that I want her to do without them, but I’m really glad that vamphile’s muses paid you a visit. Send them back now, though. She’s got more Blue Ecstasy to write.

“Well,” Xena said, pulling Gabrielle’s hands to her breasts and arching into them, “If you can teach Justin, I guess soft modern women are no challenge.” Hey now. Don’t be slamming Justin. He’s just delicate, that’s all.

“In my experience, too much focus on the specific equipment can detract from the impact of the total package.” Ha, I love Ares. (Am I supposed to hate him or something?)

OMG, who took Justin? What have you they done with him?

He left the loft, running down the stairs, trying not to think of Justin, held prisoner by a bunch of fanatical right wing Christians, electrodes attached to his beautiful dick. That would be wrong on so many levels ( ... )

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xie_xie_xie February 13 2007, 20:52:38 UTC
Whoa. Those two opening scenes were just - holy shit! First a dream sandwich and then a sleepy but intense early morning fuck.

It's funny, I had a hard time writing it because I hate Brian and Justin with others, and I don't feel anything erotic about Ares. Don't get me wrong, I can see objectively that he's way hot. But for me, nothing.

BUT... when I was able to envision it as his dream, in addition to making it okay to have it happen, since bottle!fic Justin is too emotionally fragile right now to cope with something like that, I was also able to focus it on ARES' erotic attraction to Justin, and the pissing match between Ares and Brian over Justin, without messing up my Brian/Justin dynamic or characterizations.

And unbelievably I actually had to think all that through to write the freaking thing. I need a life!

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testdog65 February 13 2007, 21:19:40 UTC
I need a life!

But Xie, you have a life. It’s right here with the rest of us, immersed in Brian and Justin’s world. Forget that anomaly called “Real Life”. Who wants to worry about earning a living, paying bills and cleaning house? Pfft.

~Ellen

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adusty53795 February 13 2007, 21:12:51 UTC
The tall woman stayed kneeling between Gabrielle’s legs, and she smiled at the younger woman. “I prefer the kind of blonde who can take care of herself.”

Gabrielle smiled at her sunnily. “That’s good. Because that’s the kind of blonde you’ve got.”

Cute. Very cute.

I like the line about Brian worrying about Justin having "electrodes attached to his beautiful dick." That made me laugh.

I love this fic. It's crackalicious!

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xie_xie_xie February 13 2007, 21:14:04 UTC
I like the line about Brian worrying about Justin having "electrodes attached to his beautiful dick." That made me laugh.

YES! Isn't that the most romantical thing EVER?

Xie

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