Xia bb♥ Sorry I took a few days before I came to comment on your ff~
This is your first fanfic and I'm so happy to be the first to comment :DD I really like the idea/plot of this, Kibum getting abused. Despite all that, he finds strength in his love for Jinki to continue on. It's sweet~ There are a few spelling errors and some sentence mistakes... but in general I like the idea! If this was a bit longer, I think the feelings would be brought out a bit better :)
It's okay because I love you. I used to take showers so I could see your smile and let your words envelope me like silk as you told me I smelled nice. Now I take showers so I have a place to crumble and cry. This part was beautiful and makes me want to hold Kibummie in my arms ;A;
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Sorry I took a few days before I came to comment on your ff~
This is your first fanfic and I'm so happy to be the first to comment :DD
I really like the idea/plot of this, Kibum getting abused. Despite all that, he finds strength in his love for Jinki to continue on. It's sweet~
There are a few spelling errors and some sentence mistakes... but in general I like the idea! If this was a bit longer, I think the feelings would be brought out a bit better :)
It's okay because I love you.
I used to take showers so I could see your smile and let your words envelope me like silk as you told me I smelled nice. Now I take showers so I have a place to crumble and cry.
This part was beautiful and makes me want to hold Kibummie in my arms ;A;
Thanks for sharing unnie~ Keep it up *U*♥
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kekeke I love that part to!
I have another onkey but I don't feel like typing it kekeke
Thanks for commenting!
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