the devils are milky

[xiahzart]

title: the devils are milky
pairings: 2min
rating: pg-13
3381 words.
not au, but with a touch of fantasy. taemin is an ancient spirit, shinee is destiny.

I wanted to finish this one for kj201's birthday before I went on with all the other stories I'm supposed to write. so girl, this one's for you :)

Comments

[be_radical]

OK wow, just wow...it was great really really beautifal.

I'm at a loss for words, really it was just great!

I loved this line

“everything takes time,” taemin says, pressing his lips to the other’s ear. “but time is nothing. we can give them nothing.”

for some reason it sounded really poetic...ah thank you for writing this amazing-ness.

[xiahzart]

thanks so much :D I was not trying to sound poetic, but I'm glad you thought so! ♥

[ahmins3]

[ahmins3]

[xiahzart]

I intended for it to have a more subtle approach I guess, for I didn't want the story to bend out of line too much. thank you for reading :3 it's not an easy thing to get through with the confusing passages.

[xiahzart]

:D I'm glad you like it babe! I kind of hoped for you to like this type of thing... well. I know you like this type of thing, but still! I tried~ I think it could use some rephrasing here and there.

and ikr, I know what you're aiming at. surely things happen for a reason though :) have faith in fate! ♥

[allyouhaveisme]

oh wow that was just - !!

i adore the style and the way it all ran, snippets of everything to help the reader understand :) and oh the symbolism!!!

it's lovely. :D

[xiahzart]

thank you! :D I'm glad the symbolism was interesting.

[sohye_x3ctmh]

This sounded so philosophical @_@
Did I ever mentioned that I love you ? ♥ ; cause I do .

[xiahzart]

♥ and I love you for reading! :D thank you