Crimson Lips

[xhesxmyxloverx]

Crimson lips pressed softly onto his skin. The shock sent
waves throughout his whole body. The lips moved lower, and lower down his
torso, creating a tingling that could send the sanest man over the edge. His
breathing became laboured as the emotions began to flare. His heart was beating
like a pounding war drum, pulse rising by the second. Soft

Comments

[beagle_agent]

This was wonderful. Beautifully written and hot!

Astrid

[xhesxmyxloverx]

Thank You :)

[cozyjo]

Wow, hon'..HOT, indeed! Very nicely done! I have to say, though..that the eye color thing totally threw me off. I thought Paul's eyes were brown or hazel. Well..I just looked it up, and oddly enough, there is a lot of links regarding the CHANGE in Paul's eye color in 1967 from brown/hazel to GREEN..which only further encouraged all the Paul is Dead rumors. Hmm.. I, myself, have never seen pictures of Paul having green eyes..unless they just LOOK it, sometimes, by the way the light hits them. I have hazel eyes, and they veer between looking golden brown or forest green..depending on the time/day/light..it's weird, but fascinating.

Great effort..and I hope you do more. :)

[xhesxmyxloverx]

Yes very true, I often hear his eyes are hazel/brown as well, lol but I decided to exaggerate his features. XD People with hazel eyes always intrigue me...my friend has hazel eyesand I'm always looking into them haha :)

Anyway, thank you for your comment!

[jpgr1963]

Oh, so very hot and romantic. I LOVE the combo. And a sexy bit that is based on Paul's luscious mouth is a hands down winner. Fantastic first smut, my darling. But now we need more... ;)

JP xo

[xhesxmyxloverx]

Than you :)