New Fic: Days After: G/R RPS : NC-17

[xhaleslowly]

Holy crap, I'm so fucking relieved I could almost cry. I was just about at the point where I thought I would never ever finish a fic again, and then somehow I was able to write this.

It's just a short one, and yes, it's another RPS, and yes, it's kind of a part two to "Not Acting Anymore". Call it the 'day after', if you will :) But I called it

Comments

[twistinside82]

GUH.

I love Gale's thoughts as Randy is sucking him off. JUST LOVE THEM.

Right now I guess I feel honest, somehow. That’s it, just honest. The sunlight lies bright across my face and I know I can’t hide anything, and so I try hard not to, for once.

YES.

I love when your fic pops up on my flist. :D

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks very much - and thanks for pulling out that section. It's always good to hear what parts worked for readers :)

Glad you liked the fic and thanks for the comments - much appreciated!

[sandid]

E.

As usual, this was stunning. I love RPS. Love your RPS.

I could picture the scene in my head. Whoa! I might need a cold shower.

Thanks.....

[stillife]

Ethan, thank you. what a treat! So beautifully written and so fucking hot. I want more!

[xhaleslowly]

I want more!

Well, Reboot was able to convince me to try a part two... so I might just have a part three in me somewhere ;) I tried to leave it open, what with Randy's offer and all! lol!

Seriously though, thanks SO much for the feedback. I'm very glad you liked this one!

[ozbrat]

Clearly we need a part three where Randy tops Gale ;)

Great fic! Short but very sweet.

[xhaleslowly]

Clearly we need a part three where Randy tops Gale ;)

To be honest, I've been kinda thinking about it... hopefully I've beat the freakin' writer's block I've been having and I'll be able to come up with something. I did try and leave that open there, you know, just to see where it might go :)

Thanks for the feedback - glad you liked it!

[vedaprophet]

omFG, i love you. k.

I gasp for breath and expect to feel my own warm cum on my chest, but instead I feel his splashing against the inside of my thigh.

1. Hope you don't mind if I quote the pornish parts down here, but ya know.
2. I love this line. It's so real and so fucking hot.

He’s staring at me, thumbnail stuck between his teeth in that gesture that’s all Randy, blue eyes flicking across my face.

guh. and yeah. *loves*

I pull him to me slowly and press my lips to his, taste him and me on his tongue and like it. Fucking love it.

Aww! happiness yay! *adores and worships*

So, in closing: I ♥ you hardcore. write more. pls? I know this is highly unoriginal feedback, but eh: you rock! And everybody is going to be begging for more, but I can't help myself saying it too, lol! xoxox

[xhaleslowly]

I love it when people pull out the parts they liked :) And yeah, I just HAD to write about Randy's thumbnail thing. It fucking kills me everytime I see him do that. That and the ear thing :D (see icon)

Thank you SO much for this most awesome feedback. Getting stuff like this totally keeps me writing :) Got a couple more on the way soon.

[xhaleslowly]

What a totally awesome thing to say, Cat :) Thanks so much!!

And I'm glad you liked that line - I didn't want too much dialogue, but I wanted something *hot*, you know? Thanks for letting me know it worked!