New Fic: First Time for Everything (5/10): B/J: NC-17

[xhaleslowly]

Happy Spring! The sun is shining and the weather is warming up and the days are getting longer. Perfect excuse for more porny stories :)

Much love to paddies for the new icon (especially since I know you've been very very busy!!!). And many thanks to everyone that's offered their feedback and encouragement. Hope you guys are continuing to enjoy the

Comments

[beathen]

OMG FIRST! Feedback in a few minutes...

[beathen]

as you push inside the trick, Brian pushes back inside you and there's the tight intensity of fucking and the satisfying fullness of being fucked and your heart triple thumps and you feel completely, utterly turned inside out.

Wow. I love that description. Your stories are always so full of details that it almost makes me feel like I'm the person in the POV instead of it being a character. That's really awesome!

Brian helping Justin with his algebra after that hot fuck was so adorable and loving. I also like how Brian let Justin recover from his orgasm and took care of getting rid of the trick.

Excellent job!!!

[xhaleslowly]

Thank you thank you thank you for this :) I love that you pulled out that part, and really appreciate your comments about the details in my writing - I've been trying to focus on description and detail with these fics, so it's rewarding to hear that you're getting that from them.

And I'm glad you liked Brian helping Justin with his homework - I was *stumped* for a "subtle first time" on this one, and was hoping that would work!

Much appreciated, as always!

[court1429]

You agree that sometimes your judgment can be less than stellar.

I laughed out loud at this line and woke my animals up! :)

You have such a wonderful gift for not only painting a visual picture with your words, but you always give the scene the right emotional atmosphere, too. I can feel the scene, the physical sensations; hear the breaths, just a perfect tone in setting the scene and how IC B/J are.

So glad you're writing this challenge. Thank you!

[xhaleslowly]

I laughed out loud at this line and woke my animals up! :)

Lol - oh good, I rarely try to put anything funny into my fics as I generally suck at it, but I'm glad that you enjoyed that line :D

Thank you so much for all your generous comments for my writing... I really appreciate your feedback - it means a lot and keeps me going!

So glad you're writing this challenge.

Hey, I'm *loving* writing this challenge - I'm just so appreciative of you guys that have waited patiently for me to put out each part! lol!

Thanks again for the comments :)

[notsopeachie]

Hi there, New lurker. I just discovered you recently but my All I can say is guuuhhhh! Fucking hot. I see sweet dreams in my future!

[xhaleslowly]

Well, welcome!! And thanks for offering up your feedback - it's always much appreciated :)

[mi_nion]

This was fabulous! I esp like the extra touch of Brian helping Justin with his alegbra.

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks for letting me know you liked the homework bit. It was a struggle to come up with a "subtle first time" for this one, and I was hoping this would work :)

Thanks for the feedback!

[mdlaw]

Oh My the first time Brian helped Justin with his homework. m :D

[xhaleslowly]

Seriously, I think the best thing about writing these "first time" fics is having the opportunity to go back to season one and explore *all* the first times between them. I always loved Brian helping Justin out with his vocabulary in ep 109 - I kind of see this fic taking place around that time :)

Thanks - as always - for the feedback, M!

[mdlaw]

I love season one. It just felt to alive, so joyous. m

[xhaleslowly]

Completely agree :) Writing these little first time fics has really made me miss not having written gapfillers for season 1, that's for sure.