Comments | xhaleslowly: Fic: G/R RPS: Just Acting: PG-13ish

xhaleslowly

Fic: G/R RPS: Just Acting: PG-13ish

Apr 04, 2004 21:23

Okay, here it is - first crack at G/R RPS. Randy's POV during the filming of the end scene of episode 219.

( Just Acting )

rps

Comments 162

Wow! galemybabydaddy April 4 2004, 21:55:17 UTC

There's no other word to describe it but, Wow!

I feel out of breath and out of sorts after reading that, so I can only imagine how Randy might feel. How do you do it? You bring a voice to these characters that sound just like what I'd envision them saying or thinking or doing. The execution is perfect!

Thank you for another amazing piece. If this is a peek into what the future holds in your fic writing, I can't wait to see the next.

Re: Wow! xhaleslowly April 4 2004, 22:19:40 UTC

*phew* Thank you so much for your feedback for this fic. I'll admit that I'm pretty nervous about it, but getting this supportive feedback is so encouraging. Seriously, thanks so much.

phibetafunkay April 4 2004, 21:56:01 UTC

Oh, DAMN that hurt...that just HURT!

*pets Randy*

xhaleslowly April 4 2004, 22:24:17 UTC

Aww... I know. It is a bit angsty, I guess. But I *like* writing angst ;)

phibetafunkay April 4 2004, 23:33:13 UTC

I have no problem with the angst...I'm an angst ho...LOL - but you made me feel it, man. Yowza.

madeofgold April 4 2004, 22:09:23 UTC

This was so good! My heart hurt for poor Randy in this one.

Welcome to LJ Ethan. So good to see you here!

:)

xhaleslowly April 4 2004, 22:24:41 UTC

Hey, thanks for the welcome :) And glad you liked the fic!

estella7 April 4 2004, 22:24:40 UTC

... I've never even been attracted to guys like him before, guys that are all macho and grungy and quirky and kinda fucked up...

Perfect description of Gale! lol

Oh Ethan, this was hella sexy. I loved them just taking an extra moment on the floor to 'calm down'. You're a natural at RPS.

xhaleslowly April 4 2004, 22:37:22 UTC

So glad you liked it. I did have to sit there for a minute and try and think exactly how you *can* try and describe Gale! lol! Glad that worked.

You're a natural at RPS.

Aw, thanks! That's an awesome thing to hear. I don't know if I'll ever write another one, but then again, I didn't intend on writing *this* one, so... who knows :)

*love your icon btw*

AHHHHH!!! danelle9118 April 4 2004, 23:09:58 UTC

Wow! Ethan doing RPS!!

I think I've died and gone to heaven.

Very hot...very edgy...and angsty for poor, poor Randy. *snif*

And this was just a kiss...I would just die to see what you would do with um, um, you know... *pants*

Thanks for posting this...loved it...

Danny

Re: AHHHHH!!! xhaleslowly April 4 2004, 23:28:03 UTC

And this was just a kiss...I would just die to see what you would do with um, um, you know... *pants*

Weeeeelllll... I don't know. I guess I could come up with *something*! lol! Glad ya liked the fic. Thanks for the feedback :)

Re: AHHHHH!!! qafhappy April 5 2004, 10:44:10 UTC

!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes, yes, yes! Come up with something!!!