Four Times Jan Thought She Had Found "The One"

[xgracekellyx]

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The white folding chairs were set out in the yard, and a few selected neighborhood kids fidgeted in their seats, waiting for the show to begin.  Soon, a little girl with bouncy red curls came running down the center of the chairs.

“They’re coming!  They’re coming!”  She reached the end of the makeshift aisle, and cleared her throat.  “BUM BA

Comments

[whitneydunbar]

I loved this Taylor. You did an awesome blossom, extra awesome job. Loved the detail, the transitions were great, and the ending was excellent! Very realistic. I'm impressed! Thanks for posting this, too. Emily and I really appreciate that you are supporting the community.

[xgracekellyx]

haha, i forgot to reply to everyones comments!

I'm glad you liked it! (:

[xgracekellyx]

aww, thanks!

and yes, she would have been wayyy adorable. (:

[anonymous]

Wow, this was great Taylor! Great job capturing emotion, the different parts flowed well together.

[becauseofthese]

Wow, this was great Taylor! Great job capturing emotion, the different parts flowed well together. (Sorry, I posted the last one anonymously)

[xgracekellyx]

thanks! (:

[michaeljanlover]

I just LOVED how she never said I love you back...not until she was with Michael! This was so sweet! Great Job!

[xgracekellyx]

why thank you (:
I've never seen you around here before, so even more thanks for reading this!