Chuck Fic: 'The Road Home'

[xfkirsten]

Title: The Road Home
Author: XFKirsten
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Chuck/Sarah, Casey, Devon, Ellie
Spoilers: Nothing specific... set somewhere late season 3 or beyond
Warnings: Sarah!whump
Summary: When Sarah gets shot, the road home is not easy - for her or for Chuck.

Comments

[inafadinglight]

This was lovely! Very, very sweet, and I like that it's told through short scenes. My favorites were when Ellie just sits next to him and hugs him, and when Chuck knows Sarah's feeling better because he catches her snapping at the nurse, lol.

I think you captured all the characters very well! Thanks for writing. :)

[xfkirsten]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

[mystizan]

Unebta'd? Sure? cuz this was all shades of amazing. Poignant, IC, nice flow, lovely metaphors. I'd say 4 stars. Srsly.

[xfkirsten]

Pretty sure! Unless you count me reading it over a hundred thousand times and tweaking it a lot. :p

Thank you very much! :D

[mystizan]

*chuckles* Well ur tweaking was very well done. & ur welcome!

[coreymon77]

aww! That was beautiful! My heart just about broke in a few of the earlier scenes. You captured Chuck's reaction to Sarah getting shot perfectly. He would never, ever leave her side. That was really sweet and poignant. Great job!

[xfkirsten]

Thank you!! They're so dedicated to each other, it's amazing. :D

[xfkirsten]

Thank you!! The first time I wrote the bit with Ellie, I thought, "There needs to be more there." And then, "...not really. Moving on!" :D

[sopranozone]

Beautiful. I could see this playing out, characterization was spot on. Bravo!

[xfkirsten]

Thank you!! :D