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[xfindyourlight]

Title: Pandemonium
Author: xfindyourlight 
Pairings: Will/Emma, Kurt/Puck, Santana/Brittany, Finn/Quinn
Warnings/Spoilers: no spoilers. Character death.  Angst.
Summary:  A moment, an accident, changes their lives forever.

Comments

[hoshitflyingpig]

i keep hoping that you'd end the fic stating that it was all just a horrible dream :( btw, what happened to jesse?

[xfindyourlight]

Not quite.:( Wouldn't it be nice if all the sad things in life were just dreams? This is one nightmare they don't wake up from sadly.

I wanted to put in something about Jesse, but I couldn't fit it in anywhere. He runs off and watches the ambulence come. He's not hurt, so he doesn't go to it and he feels like a total outsider to the group, except for Rachel (but he knew she was dead, so there was no point in that.) He's the first one back at WMHS, but he leaves after a day, feeling uncomfortable. He tries to transfer back to Carmel HS, but he's considered a traitor there, so he winds up going to a private school nearby. He doesn't join choir there.

[ipickquinn]

:((((((((((((((

so sad but really well written.

[xfindyourlight]

Thank you.:)

I LOVE your icon.

[ipickquinn]

thanks :D I like yours too. Cory and Dianna are just too presh together.

[myficklemind]

First of all, you're mean and I hate you.

Second of all, that's not how you end a story. It should end with miracles and people surviving and love and kisses.

Thrid of all, this was heartbreakingly beautifully written. And I don't really hate you, much.

[xfindyourlight]

:) I'm sorry! Puck was so close to surviving, but it really just didn't work. Thank you very much. Don't hate me too much!:)

[xfindyourlight]

Aww, thank you for reading. I hope you liked it.

[allan_93]

:'( This was devastating. I just... Wow, this was heartbreaking. You're an amazing writer.

[xfindyourlight]

Thank you very much. I'm flattered. It was so hard to write, but I couldn't stop! Sometimes I feel worse for the survivors of these incidents than I do the victims.:/