Teaser gift for memories_child

Dec 12, 2010 19:58

Teaser gift for memories_child

Title: Motel Thoughts
Author: SecretSanta
Pairing: Mulder/Scully
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: The Truth: Parts 1 & 2
Disclaimer: Don't own them.

Motel Thoughts 1 of 2

* memories_child, ! teaser gifts, 2010

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memories_child December 13 2010, 22:25:58 UTC
I really like this. It can be so hard to get the first person narration right when it comes to Mulder and Scully, but I thought this worked. There are some absolutely lovely lines as well. The first is a great opener and this one:

On your thigh is the mark from a bullet that almost ended your life. On your left shoulder is the scar from the bullet that I used to save it.

really stood out for me. Can't wait to read more!

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