Fic: Two Bits [SMLJ series] Chloe, Lois, Clark. Ollie. (rated teen)

Mar 04, 2010 15:44

Two Bits
Fandom: Smallville
Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Lois Lane, Clark Kent, Oliver Queen
Rating: Teen (strong language)
Summary: Post Season 9. Chloe has a little secret she's not aware of.
Author Notes: Part of the Stars are Made of Lemon Juice series.

Lois jumped to conclusions because it saved her time when she was right )

character: chloe sullivan, tv: smallville, character: clark kent, character: lois lane, length: under 2k, character: ollie queen, series: stars are made of lemon juice

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Re: Have a drink! I'm buying :) xenokattz March 5 2010, 15:50:30 UTC
XD
I need a drink! I have a midterm in abut 45 minutes and I did very little studying because I was writing instead. *cough* Oh man. As you know, I love family interactions. Lois & Chloe are great fun to write together because of that. I'm glad it was enjoyable. I'd hate for my GPA plunge to have been for nothing. ;)

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januaried March 5 2010, 17:14:31 UTC
Yeeek! Chlollie kinda squicks me but this is awesome nonetheless. Love Lois's banter and her and Clark's nonverbals. :D

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xenokattz March 5 2010, 17:33:33 UTC
I view Chloe & Ollie as kind of like Scott Summers; I love seeing the functional dysfunctionality of their relationships. IMHO, because of who they are, they're never going to have anything close to "normal" relationships. Not like, say, Lois & Clark.

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phoenixnz March 5 2010, 21:38:43 UTC
Wow, I really love your spot-on characterisations. Clark and Lois were awesome with Chloe, which is way better than how the SV writers have done it. As for the Chlollie, I could totally see it happening. The casual hook-up, the let's be fuck-buddies idea, and Ollie already a Dad? Yep, can see that happening too.
Great story. Very well done. And superb dialogue. And part of a series???? Can't wait for the next one.

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xenokattz March 5 2010, 23:16:40 UTC
Thanks ever so! Chloe & Ollie are lovely flawed characters to play with (Ollie especially in the comics), it makes story writing fun & interesting. And yes, a series. As if I didn't already have 2-3 series' to worry about. *L*

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sanaazzy March 7 2010, 23:00:08 UTC
lol thats pretty awesome

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