Devil Ride 56/57

[xenalvr]

Title: Devil Ride

Comments

[bsofthewest]

I love the energy in this chapter. You write so well!

[xenalvr]

thank you, BS! :) you're always so generous with your praise :)

[tanama30]

love this chapter but curious as to the package that natalia got i can't wait to see what it will bring

[xenalvr]

:D I'm still deciding if I should not reveal what it is... ohhhh I'm gonna have to. okay. *grin*

[psychomonkey_29]

Love it! Sexy, funny, and comfortable feelings in this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter but also sad that the story is close to ending.

Please update soon!

[xenalvr]

Thank you! and I'll try!

[sinjenkai]

I love it

[xenalvr]

thank you :)

[laniecroft]

Still in Laos, my last day, tomorrow I fly back home.
So I will read the final back home, you know what that means ... internet access all the time, so complaining about several epilogue chapters are ahead of you :P

Love this chapter, so sexy and cute. Going to Emmas play together, awesome. So Olivia wants them to move in together, thought you don't want them to move to fast :P Not that I'm complaining, rooted for them to move in together a couple of chapters ago.
Wonder about the big place Olivia is going to buy, maybe a farmhouse?

[xenalvr]

yeah I just thought after a crisis like that and almost getting killed... it kinda changes things. know what I'm sayin'? I hope it's realistic. :D

[xenalvr]

oh and wow! that was quite a lengthy trip! bet you had heaps of fun! tell tell!