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Devil Ride 54/57

Feb 23, 2011 20:41

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

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bsofthewest February 23 2011, 13:53:59 UTC

I love how this transpired, but how do we explain the wounded man on the floor? Mallet shot him, but do they say Mallet just ran out the door? I think I missed a clue here...not that I'm not glad he's going to get cement boots from Vizzini. Lake Michigan is filled with lots of such boots. I know. I grew up in Chicago.
Now we need 3 chapters of make-up sex and bubble baths to sooth the nerves of our ladies. 3 chapters!

xenalvr February 23 2011, 23:10:31 UTC

If I were Olivia I would tell the truth, so the cops can go after Vizzini, it's not Otalia's responsibility to cover up for Vizzini. that work? :p

bsofthewest February 23 2011, 23:25:21 UTC

Well, I'd blame it all on Mallet. He threatned Natalia. That's why they were all there. If they don't know who the dead guy is, so what. that's on the cops to figure out and that may lead to Vizzini. They were only there to help Natalia. I say, go home and take a bath and go to bed!

tanama31 February 23 2011, 23:10:25 UTC

i love that olivia took charge and got rid of mallet. what a way for gus to find out about them what a scene priceless. i can't wait for more update soon plz

xenalvr February 23 2011, 23:11:44 UTC

yeaaaaah, I totally love take-charge Olivia! :-D

choticraven February 23 2011, 23:58:34 UTC

I swear you just throw in things just for shits and giggles! * laughs * Jesus all you need is a partridge on a pear tree!

All that in one chapter... *shakes my head * Oh God, what about Harley?! If she finds out Gus is dead! * evil laugh * Oh... And how is he going to deal with Natalia now that he has made himself known that he likes Olivia. is Natalia going to worry about Gus being around Olivia now? I'm surprised she didn't smack him with the pan herself...

Are you suuuure you want to end this story? you know you really don't have to right now.. I'm sure you have quite a bit more chapters in you...

xenalvr February 25 2011, 00:22:06 UTC

haaa ;) enjoyable though?

of course i'm sure I wanna end this story. nothing lasts forever :p

psychomonkey_29 February 24 2011, 01:34:45 UTC

Yay! Mallet hopefully will be swimming with the fishes and Natalia and Olivia will be doing the horizontal mamba very soon.

So not cool of Gus to kiss Olivia, he's married and come on an idiot can see the chemistry that the two ladies have... okay he's a IDIOT so maybe not! ;)

Please update soon!

xenalvr February 25 2011, 00:22:27 UTC

LOL One track mind! :-)

korenap February 24 2011, 20:39:09 UTC

Okay, I think that's tied up. Not completely clear on what happened to Mallet and who exactly Vizzini is, but Gus has awoken to reality. Whatever will O & N do when they get back to Springfield?

xenalvr February 25 2011, 00:20:57 UTC

don't know who vizzini is? I've been mentioning him throughout the story! from the canon, he's a mobster that Mallet worked undercover for, and Mallet had caused his son's death, so he's out for Mallet's blood.