Devil Ride 53B/57

[xenalvr]

Title: Devil Ride

Comments

[korenap]

And he's down with a frying pan to the head. Great way for that scene to play out. And you've proven exes can be useful. Some of us need to be reminded of this. Can't wait for the next bit. I assume since Gus is on the way we're still gonna be in Natalia's old flat. Can't wait for that round of introductions.

[xenalvr]

LOL of course exes can be useful! one of my best friends is an ex and she's my rock :)

PS I'll write you soon, I've been writing Devil Ride instead *grin*

[korenap]

I amend, you prove that even the psycho narcissistic exes can be useful.

[bsofthewest]

Frying pan! Brilliant!
Maria, you surprised me.
Oh how I love this fic!

[xenalvr]

thank you! Always a pleasure to surprise :)

[tanama31]

omg priceless down by frying pan lol. more more more it getting too good

[xenalvr]

:) thanks! and yes, there'll be more soon :)

[psychomonkey_29]

Weirdo does not cover it! So glad that Mallet got a frying pan to the head but wish that it had been Olivia that had done it, it would have been more satisfying!

Please update soon!

[xenalvr]

LOL not you too? I think Olivia took him down metaphorically even before Maria took him down physically. I think having Maria take him down and have her say that one-liner breaks the tension of the scene. Olivia and Natalia did most of the damage.

[laniecroft]

LOL, knock out in round one. Winner the frying pan by the ex. Hilarious.
Typical Olivia, even with a gun in her face, she can't keep her mouth shut. So her telling Mallet about the hickey.

Great update, I'm really happy that Natalia is back in the arms the belongs to. Since it's official that I won't be able to read the end of your awesome story while I'm still at home, I'm rooting for more chapters. I need to find Internet to catch the end anyway, why not looking for Internet for a few times and chapters more :P

[xenalvr]

*grin* sweet! have fun, you hear! and be safe xx