Devil Ride 52/57

Feb 14, 2011 07:58

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

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psychomonkey_29 February 14 2011, 03:52:55 UTC
Uh oh, cliffhanger....on the edge of my seat! ;0

Please, please update soon!

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xenalvr February 14 2011, 23:13:51 UTC
:-D I'll try! Hang on to that seat!

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bsofthewest February 14 2011, 04:50:49 UTC
OMFG That bastard Mallet's at the door and Olivia is stuck in a bathroom with a bitch of an ex...this is too much for me! You are making me NUTS! Oh, and Natalia has a weapon. My angst level is in the red zone!

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xenalvr February 14 2011, 23:13:35 UTC
careful you don't keel over!!

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bsofthewest February 14 2011, 23:24:29 UTC
You love this torment!

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xenalvr February 14 2011, 23:55:20 UTC
Indeed I do! :D

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korenap February 14 2011, 06:58:49 UTC
Oh my, you brought the ex in. You naughty girl you. No problem whatso ever with this ending with Olivia and the drugged out ex hiding in a bathroom and crazy boy at the door. Go ahead. Stop. Make us wait. Give us only this short chapter with so few left to go. Forgiveness can be so hard between chapters.

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xenalvr February 14 2011, 23:13:16 UTC
LOL your comment made me laugh :-D well I've just been put out of employment so I might be able to rush the next chapter... ;p

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laniecroft February 14 2011, 16:32:42 UTC
I'm not going to comment how much your timing for stopping this chapter sucks :P
I glad that Olivia found Natalia but I'm torn between looking forward to the expected catfight in the bathroom or the ass kicking in the main room :D
Glad you're back writing again, I started missing you.
Any chance you'll finish this story by Feb. 22th? And before you even think it, NO I DON'T want this story to end, oh no, no ... but I'll fly to Laos and I have no idea if there's internet access and therefor I would prefer to read the end (if you really must end) before I'm separated from civilisation ops I mean Internet :P

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xenalvr February 14 2011, 23:12:15 UTC
I highly doubt it, at this point... o_o but one can hope? :p what're you up to going to Laos and how long'll you be there for? Heaps of my mates have been there and they seem to be able to update their facebook etc. regularly, so... ;p

LOL I'm pretty pleased with bringing Maria in!

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laniecroft February 15 2011, 06:11:54 UTC
I'll be in Laos for about 3 1/2 weeks on holidays, travelling around and I hope to take tons of pictures. Big fan of Southeast Asia. Let's hope I'll catch your updates in Laos, otherwise you have to wait for my comments until I'm back home again :D

I'm really looking forward to more Olivia - Maria scenes, the glimpse we got screened for more. Love Olivia in bitch mood and Maria seems to bring it out in her :P

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xenalvr February 15 2011, 07:11:02 UTC
awesome :) well if I don't get to "speak" to you by then, you have a great holiday and be safe xx

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