Devil Ride 50/57

[xenalvr]

Title: Devil Ride

Comments

[tanama30]

another great update i hope olivia finds natalia quick before things get crazy. update soon plz

[xenalvr]

thanks! I'm gonna try to update ASAP :) thanks for being so patient!

[psychomonkey_29]

The story is picking up ( ;) ) and Olivia needs to find Natalia before the fun starts. Alan, Mallet, and even Gus seem to all have trouble planned for Natalia and Olivia. Why oh why to boys have to be such big pain in the asses.

Thanks for the update and awaiting the next.

[xenalvr]

glad the story is picking up after 50 chapters! *grin*

[bsofthewest]

Oh, the mayhem is ramping up. This is so wild. I love it. Worried about Natalia. I have a feeling she is about to jump into trouble. Olivia, you are such a snark queen.

[laniecroft]

You sure know how to twist the storyline, just when I thought there couldn't be more twists you come up with another one.
Took Olivia quite some time to figure out that Natalia is really gone. Hope she finds Natalia in time before she gets into trouble.
And what the hell is Gus's problem, Harley certainly is more sympatic.
Can't wait for the next chapter even if it brings us closer to the storyend.

[xenalvr]

woohoo! I've converted you into not minding the ending of the tale! :D

[ttandme69]

oooohhhhhhhhh 2 chapters to read!!! I cannot wait to see what Natalia has in store for Mallet?!?!?!?! Liv will not be happy if anything happens to Natalia while she is hoping to get Mallet out of their lives! thanks for the post and eagerly awaiting the next chapter! thanks again, Lisa

[xenalvr]

thanks, Lisa! will be posting soon; the cyclone hitting Cairns has been a bit of a hassle... :p