Immortal Beloved: Gen 1.3

[xel_squirgle_ox]

It seems that I've been caught up in playing instead of putting the story up here! I'm kind of further than this at the moment, so I have plans for what is going to happen in the next three updates or so.

This post is my first attempt at writing a whole entry in nothing but dialogue, so I apologize if it's hard to follow.

Comments

[strange_tomato]

I almost totally missed this over the holiday weekend and the sea of spam on the sim_rants community during that lj content strike... so sorry this is a late comment.

I really enjoyed the way you wrote this in mostly dialogue. It was really interesting to read this way.

It seems like there is a lot more going on between Johnny, Ripp, and Ophelia than Johnny is letting on. Very interesting. (I laughed at the pic of Ripp goosing Ophelia with the thought balloon of Johnny being exed. *snicker*) Yes, Johnny... go get that cold shower.

Very entertaining.

[xel_squirgle_ox]

Lj content strike? Hmm, never heard of that. I'm glad you liked it! It was really hard to do.
Johnny, Ripp, and Ophelia get the best thought bubbles over their head in my game. I really thought that picture was hilarious too, because it's like "Fuck Johnny, I'm going ahead and squeezin' your ass!"

I actually think it's more along the lines of Johnny doesn't really know what's been going on with Ripp. Unfortunately with Ripp and Stella in other places, I kind of forgot to play that dorm for a while. I'll maybe put them back into the story once they are graduated.

[amaryssobellus]

While he is all alone with creepy Nery Hutchins who keeps talking about makeup.
LOL! Oh man.

I do love how you use the pictures to tell more of the story than the actual words. That's the way I like to read sims stories and post them. All in all, I'm starting to feel a little bad for Johnny and Ripp. Ophelia seems to have them by the... well, you know.

[xel_squirgle_ox]

I really like that dormie! That's literally all he did the whole time I played that place. Hmm... Come to think of it, he's still there. Maybe I'll figure out something to do with him later on

[amaryssobellus]

Anyway, I hope you continue to enjoy my story! Looking back, I see that I've come a long way. Gen. 1 here doesn't seem like it's even mine anymore.
Isn't it great to see how far you've come? Though I don't think I'm really that great of a story writer or writer period, I know that I'm doing a whole lot better than when I first started in 2005. :)

You'll see me making random comments for a while, 1. so I know where I left off and 2. because I always like to leave comments to things that entertain me. :)

[showercapfrog]

Oh Johnny! His expression here is just brilliant. I love him and his awesome expressions!

"Of course she has no intentiosn of doing anything"... of course not Johnny, you continue to delude yourself.

Heh. Makeup.

"I hope you don't mind" Heh, Johnny would be all "WTF?"

OH GOD I LOLLED FOR REAL. "He allows me to be in the room" LOLWAT.
Such a Ripp thing to do! And Van doesn't seem to mind it either ;)

Heh, ritualistic dance.

Aww, Stella is trying to be "human" and it isn't working.
Stella with Tank? That's actually quite a good match. I <3 Tank and Stella.

[xel_squirgle_ox]

Ripp probably finds it very kinky that a hot alien girl is studying their sextual activities while they are doing the deed.

Stella and Tank basically fell in love on their own. I love them so much, theyre so cute together.

[showercapfrog]

I would love hot alien girls to study me... wait, did I say that out loud? :P

[petalbrook]

I am completely not surprised by Ripp letting Stella observe him and Van while they're getting busy! Ripp is such a perv that I think he would enjoy be watched.